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Now THAT'S how you get a human into Equestria.
Awww yeah, finally a new chapter!
Omg, it's midnight and i just saw this awesome update... welp, screw sleeping.
Is this... an update?!
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This is getting interesting now. Can't wait to see what happens next.
You know, I haven't really been compelled by Craig most of the time.
But seeing him try to deal with Alex's highly traumatic experience was actually really cool.
That's one hell of a cliffhanger. Good chapter.
Awwwwww yisssssssssss, about time!
Let's see what we got here...
....Well now!
I'm happy that things slightly worked out....now to see the unforseen consequences....
Omg please let him be in equestria. I don't even want to deal with the shitstorm of earth right now. God that made me depressed.
Shit. As I'd expected, Alex's mental health went to hell and stayed there. At least he let Luna have it through his words, and he wasn't injured too badly in the physical realm.
Good job on the official procedure, that ran by very organically. I kinda expected him to spill it to the federals, but alas, he kept clammed up. But now, Etherea is injured and transporting him away, likely to Equestria and away from the trigger-happy MIBs.
Man, if things were mushing up his head before, I can hardly imagine how horrible it'll get for his sanity once he's in horsey world. It'll be a MIRACLE if he doesn't go catatonic for a full fucking week.
So, VERY serious question: now that you published the chapter that you had so much difficulty with, will the next one come out faster? I've literally got a lump in my throat from the anticipation of how Alex's next confrontation with Luna will be. The message to Etherea made it crystal clear that the blue cunt has - in no exaggerated words - destroyed his life, and from how promptly Ethy came to see him, she wasn't too contrary to her seeing him, something that may indicate some contrition. When all of his barely-sane hatred hits her... like a telekinetic slam and a mental invasion... it'll be TENSE.
So much wait! Now I read it... Now more wait! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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More plz :3
Ah di'n' do it!
I hope this story ends with Weiss and Luna sharing a prison cell somewhere.
Not likely, I know, but they're both so violent and stupid. They deserve each other.
Well then.
I suspect that two federal agents will be spending the rest of their careers filling out paperwork.
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Amen. I'd rather that he AND atherea had been transported to equestria. I'd hate to think that he went there alone or that they're still in the hospital with her shot and bleeding.
I fucking love this story.
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Oh sure, he gets to go to the magical pony land and live in luxury while his roommate is now the last one standing as the FBI, CIA, NSA, and all the other black box three-letter-acronym departments go down on him like sharks on a bucket of chum. For the poor slob left on Earth, it's all gonna go X-Files.
Still, I really want to see him meet Luna, get up close and personal for a tense greeting-- and punch her right in the face. Sure, given his current state of cracked ribs and whatever loopy funpills he's on it might be more of a girly slap than a meaty punch... but it's the thought that counts. (Let's just hope Luna's not so OP that when he does hit, it's not like punching Superman and leaving him with broken fingers)
On a more serious note, Ethera's been shot. We have no idea how bad it is and while magic will probably work far better than Human medicine, this will not put Earth in a good light at all. Oh? It's even more violent than you first experienced? Well, let's just never ever visit there. In fact, rather than dumping baddies in Tartarus, let's dump them on Earth, it sounds like an even worse place.
The only thing saving Alex from dungeon time is that he kept Ethera safe, fed, educated (sorta), and somewhat entertained up until she was taken back. Pretty sure any other humans brought over will be treated like a rabid animal.
Well that was amazing, as per usual. Here's hoping we don't have to wait 6 months for the next one! Seriously though, take your time, dude. Quality over quantity.
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Waaaaait, waitwaitwait... You mean to tell us that what we've read up till now, all those 257k words... all of that was just the first act ?!
Shachza, let me just say that I freaking love you.
I'm really, really, REALLY eager to see what the next act(s) will be, even more after such a cliffhanger in this chapter !
Ohh I hope he compares Luna to Nightmare Moon to her face as soon as they meet on the other side.
Keep that hate alive for a few chapters please.
6365310 His greatest defense is that he has no magic and at no point in the series had any kind of weapon in hand.
The only thing he ever did was participate in written conversation, everything else was done by others.
Amazing, especially the teary eye moment at the end. Bravo to you, sir.
I'm happy he's safe now (at least, i hope) and can see Celestia for real... . Let Etherea her parents and Celestia have mercy... and Luna... well, Alex need to get her back!
All the FBI can hope is that the camera survived, or at least the ultra high capacity SD memory card.
Theres a lot of frying tonight flying round. Hope the hospital didnt take too hard of a hit.
Wonder if he will bump into Katherin sometime.
Cliffhangers are bad for my health. I hate you.
God damnit. I guess I'll just hibernate 'till the next chapter comes out. I can't stand it.
Did we expect anything different from the fucking feds? Nope. Shoot first and ask questions later, preferably while torturing.
And off to Equestria we go!
Gods, it seems every time Etherea comes to Earth she gets injured in some way
I applaud your choice in literature, as I'm currently reading the exact same book.
Though I am a bit disappointed. I was hoping Craig would join Alex on this excellent adventure
The fbi has a alicorn on tape, as well as magic. And blood splatter from the gun shot wounds. Add military involvement and the press being called to a shooting in a hospital. The fbi will get all data from the cell phone company, and all Internet records from his provider. Genetic anylysis will confirm the video recording and all of the above will be classified. His family and friends will be monitored forever. His roommate will be in either supermax or gitmo in 12 hours, no expense spared and never free air or sunlight for the rest of his life.
Wait!
So Etherea has been shot and then she teleported herself and Alex into Equestria?
I can't help but see the irony in this chapter.
I wonder how those two FBI guys are going to explain their witness going poof after they asked to talk to him "in private".
An investigation will turn up gunshot in that room. And blood.
Also, yes, Etheria, the thing that hit you was another of those quirky human inventions that run on explosion! ^_^
This chapter feels unnecicarily long. A lot of it feels like it could be cut and you wouldn't lose much.
On a different note: he was just flung against the wall. Why didn't he go with the obvious answer: tell the truth but couch it as impossible/remembering it wrong? "I must have hit my head because I remembering arguing with Princess Luna from My Little Pony, only like a real one and she used her magic on me and caused all the stuff to happen." Maybe I'm too logical because I'm not under pressure or in pain on meds. As for Etheria, just play the white knight card. Cute girl, traveling and needed a helping hand after some things happened to her. No I don't know much about her, etc.
This is somehow an even bigger cliffhanger then last time!
I love you for it.
This story is interesting with good depth on matter of subject, but i scrolled up some part of it. Author pays to much attention to plain details, leaving plot to wander around unnecessary things.
Hm, admins really should start to ban people for cliffhangers for storys that wouldnt be updated in months...
Luna and Agent Weiss need to get schooled on why you shouldn't attack non-hostiles. Where are the good old people who just stand there like idiots when things don't go according to any plan?
In regards to the chapter... Fu***ng yes! It was good. Didn't lose my attention for a second. I had to wind down after the cliffhanger.
I was a little surprised Alex and Craig never said anything about the situation over the whole 20k words. I (very much) appreciate that you're going for realism but this was surprising. There were a lot of inconsistencies that I believe were intentional. Looking forward to it. Please don't say mind magic because that is almost only used as a bullshit reason to justify how characters act.
I must confess, the more I see of Alex, the less I want to see him succeed in romancing Etherea. He just comes off as someone who isn't nearly as emotionally stable or adult as he ought to be for someone of his age. Perhaps his anger during this chapter is normal, but it struck me as rather unhinged too.
I have to admire Etherea's ability to make bad decisions, though.
Also, although I've only recently started reading this fic, I really do hope it doesn't take six months for the next chapter to land; I get the impression that this story is in for a long haul, yet the plot isn't really moving forward that quickly when compared to how quickly (or not) the chapters are being updated.
That was an intense chapter. Was like, "what the fuck!?" At the end. She took him to Equestria. She had to of. Alex is going to have a stroke or a heart attack. He is so fucked. He might as well stay in Equestria. Hus life on Earth is completely fucked now.
I will say I had completely forgotten about this story. It's been so long. I was pleasantly surprised to see an update.
Wait...was Alex shot?
Welp. At least Alex is no longer the least competent person in this fic! Congrats Agent Weiss! You've completely fucked up a first-contact scenario! Where the hell are Mulder and Scully when you need them?
You move down to 2nd place in the incompetence olympics, Alex. Now go help clean up all that spaghetti you dropped around the hospital, and apologize for being a sullen child towards people that were just trying to help you.
Luna takes 3rd, really. The violence was forgivable, but upon looking at things again, given that Etherea was clearly in reasonable shape upon immediate inspection, and it even seems (it's unclear) that she may have been protesting Luna's treatment of Alex during the event, Luna should have taken Alex for questioning rather than letting this all stew.
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The only allowance I give Alex is that he was probably in shock at first, and then doped up, but painkillers don't give him that much excuse for failure and childishness. You'd think someone who's claimed to be a sci-fi/fantasy nerd would have some amount of genre awareness and foresight into this situation. Delaying responses to Etherea was utterly dickish, and his first response was even more sullen childishness and misplaced, overwrought anger. Who cares that your shit got blown up, you're still getting text messages from an alien horse, you bag of hammers!
Yes, Luna made the situation FUBAR, but he should have immediately started asking if the magical horse princesses could maybe--CAREFULLY--come help explain things, take over from his unqualified incompetence, begin some actual diplomacy, and pay for the property damage, since it was--starting with Etherea--their bloody fault to begin with that first contact has been made.
Delaying communication and moping around in a funk was also clearly a bad idea since of fucking course they think it was a bomb, and so of course the FBI and/or DHS is going to show up. He had two days, and he didn't bother trying to come up with some sort of explanation? Even if it was a shitty one, having something to say is better than just freezing up like he always does. I like how even complete strangers can tell that Alex is driving himself into near-catatonia and/or a heart attack when he's stressed, and even the EMTs think he's acting far more bonkers than the actual injury warrants. Alex needs some god damned anti-anxiety meds or something--he's like one of those fainting goats when he gets stressed.
I'm always so conflicted by this fic...on the one hand, I like the worldbuilding and I hope we get even more of it soon. On the other, Alex is...just terrible sometimes, so that I kinda want to agree with Cinna in not wanting any actual romance to work just out of a sort of vindictiveness. However, upon stepping back from things, both Alex and Etherea are at times childish, impulsive, and generally kind of stupid, so hey, they're made for each other!
And on the other-other hand, cliffhangers! Write faster so I can be conflicted again!
Glad to see an update, however this chaper felt disappointing Alex seems to have lost all his progress in dealing with things. I get the whole trama and meds. But his irrational issues did not seem to mesh with what seemed to be coherent thought.
Honistly felt like a whole bulk of this was muddled up in the. Goings and doings of the first hours after the event with little thought on what happed between. Find it almost unbeleavae he spent two days in the hosptal and could not come up with a hint of an idea out side of the can't lie can't truth mantra.
He just dose'nt seem to be that inept of charicter before this point.
6365064 Well at least when he gets back they will believe him that interrogation was being recorded with a camera.
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Something that should be taken into account as well: Hospitals tend not to tell you everything they give you. it's entirely possible they kept giving him some drugs that he had no idea about.
Though I do think it's mostly shock and anger at his treatment by Luna. A little more and she might've killed Alex.
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I'll take Weiss' shooting first over Alex's confused dithering over his sexuality any day. I know a lot of people are kind of mocking his actions (shooting) but I think the behavior is perfectly acceptable, given the situation.
I don't disagree that Etherea appears to be rather impulsive and stupid at times, she certainly is, and you could probably make the case that she's rather childish (ie can't stand even the mention of bodily functions) but it's not on the same level as Alex. Etherea just strikes me as sheltered. Craig's kind of the same way: I'm not a super fan of dumbass style characters, those characters who are willfully ignorant about the world around him, but at least he seems fairly well adjusted. Alex... just doesn't.
He's supposed to be the 'smart one' but he appears no more capable of intelligent thought or action than someone like Craig.
Plus Etherea is hella cute so she gets a pass for most of her bad behaviour.
Like Alamais I really do find myself conflicted on this story; the worldbuilding is wonderful, but I can't help but wonder if it wouldn't be better if it wasn't a First person pov story.
I don't think he is going to keep his pants dry whenever he is around Luna. Luna basicly implied that she could kill him whenever she wants. I don't think that such a mental trauma can be overcome just like that.
"Look! It's something we haven't seen Before, quick! Let's shoot it!!"
*Sigh* A Classic stupid human reaction, poor Ethera, i do so hope she's alright.
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Could you clarify on what you dislike so much about the supposed incompetence of Alex. While he certainly hasn't been perfectly stable and has whinged quite a bit on sexuality issues, I have not seen anything that puts him at sub-competence level or as someone who is malajusted, just not at "I am a hero who is confident and understands what to do when the extremely bizarre happens."
But I haven't really thought about it that much, so I'd like to know what you see that you don't like.
Oh hells yes
What happened to the third man?