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Are you psychic? You just had to update this the night before my geography mock (actual exam is in like 4 or 5 weeks), didn't you.
Hmm, revise+sleep or read...
I'll read because this totally counts towards English revision. Totally. Oh, and biology because ponies.
Etherea is going to give Luna a bitching out fest.
Well, here we go! Here's hoping I get to see what happens sooner than 6 months from now!
I kid, I kid...well, kinda. It's always worth the wait, dude! Making quality stuff takes time!
A 31,000 word chapter update?
Well, my taxes aren't technically due until tomorrow...
Yep, and many of those explosions are fueled by liquid dinosaurs.
Aaand she's going into heat.
HOLY GOB SMACK! That ambush there nearly made me produce brick-like protrusions in my shorts! In short, that escalated quickly....
Wow...It's been a while since this updated...I'm glad I have it on watch, otherwise I would of miss this thing.
*Reads through chapter*
Oh boy, I have a feeling we'll be seeing Etherea POV in the next chapter methinks.
So Luna is responsible? Interesting if true.
Mind screening and injected suggestion?! What the fuck!
I was gonna comment on the rest of the chapter, but this ripped my sails. Luna can go die in thermonuclear fire.
I stand by what I said. Unless you are having sex with something with a cum volume that exceeds the tensile strength of your insides, you are not likely to experience explosions during sex.
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I have the most eerie sense of timing. My friends always complain that though I'm perpetually late, I always arrive just after someone asked where I was.
Knowing all that pony biology will be important once we make contact with Equestria. You're just very progressive-minded!
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"Sister, is that a black eye you have there? How did that happen and who got smote for it?"
"Our little Etherea did not wish to be rescued..."
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Oh... Right... It's tax season. I totally forgot about that.
Gah! I hope nobody gets audited because they were too busy reading my story to file on time.
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Etherea:
I think that would break her.
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How do you rescue hostages? Smash and grab. (Sort of.)
There are a few lines in that scene - like Luna's introductory actions - that have just oodles of behind the scenes action that Alex can't possibly be aware of. I'm actually surprised that there aren't any comments about the details yet.
I'm not sure what to make of this chapter. I liked it until the end. The ending bit just doesn't have enough for me to like it or hate it until I see what effects come from it. So far it sounds like the guy somehow got stabbed or something in his side? His appendix burst? Also, if they're going for a smash and grab, they kind of suck at the intelligence gathering part of retrieving a hostage. Especially if AzureMare is literal and would already have some information about this world.
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Are we going to get to see anything from the Equstrians side of things?
had to re-read the end.
That fight scene was hard to follow, but its clear we arent given all the information.
That line:
is the one that really make me wonder what is going on. That's an odd thing to say, as i don't think he could follow Luna's eyes during the fight.
Plus, i think Celestia showed up too? The gold and white light, after that Luna made a "non-effect" spell (likely a "call" to say celly to teleport to her position for "hammer time").
.. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Why do you write these mega-chapters instead of more frequent more reasonable sized ones? Because aiming for three to four 6000 to 8000 word chapters over the period of time between this and the last update, instead of this behemoth 30K sized one would have been a lot more digestible, in my opinion with the benefit of more frequent updates.
This chapter was pretty amazing. I really feel like they bonded during their time spent together in this chapter. I was thinking at first that they would of had to take him with them becuase of how injured he was. But hopefully we get to see the story for etherias view for awhile. I really think that he will be happiest if he can remain with his pony princess. Also, I don't mind the chapter lengths. It all worked together as one day, it flowed and seemed consistent. If people want they can always use the bookmark feature for what it was intended. Love it! Keep it up.
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I think Luna pulled a Genjutsu on the guy.
Totally worth staying up three hours past my bedtime... And I get the feeling Luna just smashed him through his computer and the desk it was sitting on...
I got the update notification at 11pm. I just couldn't let it past... So I read the previous chapter as a reminder (it HAS been a long time...) and this one next.
2am, I am exhausted, my shift starts in 6 hours, but I am content. And eagerly waiting for the next chapter, because of that cliffhanger at the end !
Thank you Shachza for another excellent read !
Oh my, I love this story so much! Wanted to comment last night, but at 2 am, when I was through this chapter, I was just too tired.
Because that's it – you don't update often, but when you do, you really deliver. Man, that was a hell of a chapter! 30k and ending with a bang. And stupid sexy Etheria and real life horses. Awesome. I want to say I want to read the next chapter now, but honestly, I'll gladly wait for the next if you keep up this kind of quality and quantity!
i can' wait to see where the romance part comes in. keep up the good work cause i'm very interested to see where this goes.
Ermagerdblargh30k of pure awesome, but that cliffhanger will give me an ucler.
Love that nuzzle at the end and Etherea finaly trusting him a tiny bit more. Here's hoping Luna did not damage him too bad.
5867510 The narrative is fluid enough that a 30K chapter works like a 5K one. If you can't read it all at once, bookmark a paragraph when you stop and the page'll open back on it even if it's a mobile browser you're using.
*sigh*And they had such a nice day, too.
Was Luna in his head? Cause it sounded like she was in his head
Fingers crossed for a chapter in Equestria. I want to see Craig and Etherea's changeling friend have a conversation together!
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Now, now, Jack. You must think in terms of how would it come across to an outsider. Luna would probably go to any lengths to secure her niece.
Of course I also have no idea about that mind screening thing.
...Does that mean what I think it means? If so...
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They also experience upwards of 1.5 billion explosions before even remotely beginning to wear out.
Saw this update, yesterday, thought, should I? checked the length, and thought, nah, Wednesday is a non town day. Good thing. at least 3 hours to read. the girls in the mall though, such a good thing tey were only bitching about the hair and not the all up they couldve Shimmered too. Although how to call Ethel. Cousin from Europe? With that wanting to be freinds? Step sister? that has all sorts of fun overtones and legal genetics.
The only thing I can say about all that time at the horses?
Well Helllloooooooooooo Princessss.
Is someone going to be showing gamer Luna is Azure Mare, given the length of time ago the account was active, and the current age of Etheria etc?
Of course Luna, once the rift has been traced, is going to come in fully tooled up. Especially if she is Azuremare. given that she has to reach Earth itself, imagine if there had been a screw up, and for one the local intelligence had been on teh ball and Ethera had been picked up and at least in a law enforcement location, medical facility or research lab for tests, or even a secure facility. I mean, just how many disused nuclear silos havent been sold off because they are still in use?
Next to see if the interdimentional phone line has been cut.
Nice Cliffhanger
I can't tell if they are still on earth or not
Now, to wait four to six months for the next update.
I just read 30k words? No wonder I got nothing done at work today.
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hopefully not, the story is to good for that.
Cliffhanger, dam it:D
Can't wait to read more of this great story, and If I have to wait another 6 Months for the next chapter^^
Holy.... I knew this whole chapter made me think about SOMETHING, but I couldn't point it out until now !
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This is SO obvious !
Well, just discovered this story. Insta fav. Now, I wait.
YAY update! i loved the chapter, can't wait for more
He should have learned a simple phrase of equestrian. He had the time. "Friends," even, in equestrian might have been enough.
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The main over-arching problem at this point in the story is that there is this huge puzzle and every character has different pieces from it. They're all looking at their pieces and trying to figure out what the picture actually is, but none have figured out that they don't even have all the pieces.
Things will come together over the next three or so chapters.
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Not quite. Alex had been behind the computer, which was opposite where Luna entered. Etherea was on the bed to his right in the corner closest to Luna. Alex had been moving out from behind the computer to get to Etherea.
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Ah! A true literature aficionado! I know how that works since I've done it far too often myself. It's especially tough when that favorite story updates while you're at work, but I'm sure you know that too.
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Alex and Craig are still on Earth.
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And this is why Alex isn't a diplomat or something like that. It might be a flimsy excuse, but I'm going with everyone was too distracted and/or complacent to seriously act on the possibility of hostile ponies.
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I can't wait for it either! I should totally write faster, or something.
Whoa! Damn, dude, that's some real unexpected drama at the end, there. I liked that part at the horse farm, too. Eager to see what Celestia and Luna have in the way of opinions on Alex and what will be come of his ties to Etheria.
Damn, this is making me really want to write again, too...
I actually just now noticed how strangely fitting it must seem to an outsider that a race of cultured primates still uses so many faeces-based invectives.
Then I can see this happening soon as the ponies come back.
Except in my mind this is happening in Equestria...
My mind can be a really fucked up place once you send it there. And this story has on multiple occasions.
Awwww, big o'l meany Luna! She better get her horse ass back to Earth and properly apologise to Alex!
So...this is where the story really begins...right?
That was uncalled for Luna and way more than a little extreme. I could see several dozen different things to do with Alex, or any unknown creature, but burning his right side (really hope she didn't permanently damage his internal organs) and using telekinesis to almost crush him to death is not among them. Overreaction much?
If this was a tactical squad conducting a rescue operation and someone made a bee line towards the person being rescued there's a pretty damn good chance they would be properly ventilated in the bat of an eye. Alex is not a hostile, do they know that? A princess of Equestria is a pretty big deal, I wouldn't take any chances over the safety and security of her over someone whose motives are unknown. Point is Luna would have been justified in killing him in order to guarantee Etherea's safety but she didn't, so she did in fact show restraint in her actions.
To me this was more or less a failure on Etherea's part more so than Alex's as Eth, as a princess, is probably well aware of the capabilities of her people and the course of action they would take if someone of her stature went missing unexpectedly. Like others have said though, retrospect from afar offers advantages in perspective, especially when determining a plan of attack.
You've done a wonderful job building up your little version of Equestria, now here's to hoping that we actually get to see it!
I just noticed. The illustration for this story seems to be set in Equestria ovo
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>Held within a magical aura. With crushing force.
White and Gold might be Celestia, but who is Violet? Does Twilight even have a place here right now?
Yellow might be Etherea, White being her 'savior' rushing to her and casting a powerful (teleportation?) spell. Which matchs with the 'fewer colors' observed afterward.
God damn I need to know who's yelling in distress.
I NEED TO KNOW!
I bet the neighbours will call the authorities after this fight, and that's where it'll all go downhill.
And he never did get to explain humans are omnivores...
Keep going! ;)