Another morning for Berry Punch and Ruby Pinch takes a sudden turn when the notice of sixth missing pony hits the local newsstand. Who will be next and how will this affect the relationship between mother and daughter?
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Infinite Badness
We can't stop here, this is Bad Country!
Infinite Badness
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This is actually a very interesting story and a really great concept. Has every aspect of a simple horror, so I love it
However, there were quite some typos and grammatical errors 
but those are easy fixes
The ending was so sudden, it would leave a reader grasping at it, dying to know what happens next, but I thought it was well played and it leaves it up to the imagination. I don't know if you plan to continue it, but it's just as great on its own. Thumb up for you.
No seriously, the ending was like dropping a brick wall on the track in the middle of an Indy 500 race. BAM right there. Right in the face.
Danke!
Yea I agree with everything Enigma has to say. Very interesting concept as we look into the life of Berry Punch...keep going my friend.
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I found the formatting a bit weird, but apart from that, you have grabbed my attention, good sir. Please do continue.
1423591 Not gonna lie, I like weird formatting because of the effects it has on readers. And thanks and I most certain will.
Great chapter good sir. A toast to you!
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Wow. ^^ That image was way bigger than I thought lol. ^^
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That is a big image.
And thanks, kind sir.