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Twilight Sparkle and The Raven

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Inspired by Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven".

Basically Twilight Sparkle telling a ponified version of The Raven as a story to the Cutie Mark Crusaders.

All criticism is appreciated, whether positive or negative, as long as it is constructive.

Enjoy!

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Mannulus

Mannulus #1 · Oct 10th, 2012 · · ·

Thumbs up and favorited for the first paragraph, alone. If you could go back and get it just a little bit more in line with the meter and verse of the poem, it would be perfect.

Love Poe. Love Ponies.

Inb4 "Poeny" jokes.

Poison_Joke

Poison_Joke #2 · Oct 10th, 2012 · · ·

Great little read, enjoyed it and even got a few goosebumps :)

just4imagemails

just4imagemails #3 · Oct 10th, 2012 · · ·

1417229 Perhaps, but Poe's writing style is a bit difficult to emulate. I was perhaps a bit too lazy to put it entirely into poetic format... at some point, the wheels would have begun to fall off the buss anyways, haha.
1417270 Yeah, Poe'll do that to ya. He's a master at the creepy and spooky.

just4imagemails

just4imagemails #4 · Oct 11th, 2012 · · ·

Ack. Where are all these dislikes coming from?

No one's even leaving a negative review, it's just arbitrary spite!

So sad.

I would like to know how to improve such a story if it doesn't fit your liking, so if you do happen to dislike this story, please feel free to tell me why!