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Soaring


An amalgamation of nice and spice. Writing for fun. Wonderbolts enjoyer. AiE/HiE shitposter.

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Roseluck has a problem. She loves this alien named Anon. While that may be a problem for some ponies, Roseluck knew there was someone else in the way. A certain someone she knew all too well...


WARNING: Light RGRE themes.

Inspired by the song VOLA - Straight Lines.

Art by viwrastupr (linked in source of image).

Pre-read by 6-D Pegasus.

Gift for Lucky Seven. Welcome back to Fimfic!

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Comments ( 21 )

Roseluck passed by the Sugarcube Corner, a lively bakery now shuttered and dormant with a ‘come back tomorrow 😩’ sign hung on its doorstep.

I laughed out loud at this 😂

Great fic my guy. Wholesome and adorable 🙌🏽

Aaaaa lovely writing of Roseluck here and great interactions with her and Anon, you did a wonderful job with this! Also oh my God ‘come back tomorrow 😩’

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Thank you, 6-D! Really appreciate you giving your feedback last night on this one. :twilightsmile:

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I just imagined Pinkie Pie putting that there and I died laughing. Shoutout to Lucky Seven for the emoji change though.

Thank you! Happy you enjoyed the fic. :pinkiehappy:

Adorable set piece, thanks for sharing it with us.

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Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the fic. :twilightsmile:

Adorabetes 🥰

Hye
Hye #7 · 1 week ago · · ·

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It happened again.
I thought you were Runic, which speaks volumes of how good you are.
Haven't read the story yet, but will read it in one sitting when I can.

Edit:
Eyup. My earlier opinion is unchanged.

Another fantastic Anon story, bravo!

I loved this, absolutely hilarious and adorable at the same time. It was definitely a sweet read and something I needed today specifically, so I'm glad I was unable to read it until this moment.

Love ya, Soaring. Thank you very much for the gift <3

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Always happy to deliver.

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I swear this is not my intention to get you mixed up between Runic and I. Thank you for the major compliment. Hope you enjoy the story when you get to read it later!

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Thank you, Jymbroni! Happy to see you in my comments on my fics, and I'm glad you enjoyed the fic! :twilightsmile:

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Love you too, Seven! I'm happy you enjoyed your gift, and I hope to see even more updates on Roseluck's Realization soon!

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Nah, you're a fantastic writer and deserve all the comments!

This reads like what a autistic person thinks normal people are like. I'm not convinced that this wasn't written by a AI.

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Very interesting that you understand the inner workings of an autistic person's mind so intimately

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He's the autism expert, don't worry. I'll let him have his fun (however that works for him). I don't know, I'm not autistic.

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Takes one to know one brodie 😂

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You have a problem with that or something? Or is this just one of those "Heads I win Tails you loose" scams where you're dismissing me opinions both because I'm autistic and because I'm not?

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So let me get this straight: you commented on my fic saying that my story is AI and that I'm autistic (which I don't use AI and I'm not autistic fyi) in an aggressive sounding matter like some wannabe literary critic would do, and then all of a sudden, you claim that you're autistic and that we have a problem that you're autistic?

No, I could give two shits less if you're autistic. You just decided to be a douche and comment on my fic like you're some know-it-all. As I've said literally a day ago in a blog of mine, criticism is only worth the intention and tone it is given in, and clearly you're not here to see me improve, you're here to be extremely off-putting about it. So, instead of seeing you comment again some random bullshit, I'll make this easy for you. Have a nice day.

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I love when people act like assholes and then they try to preach when you hit back. Straight pussy back-pedaling behavior.

After writing a lot of dark things, this story was definitely a good break, because I forgot the last time I read a story like this, where there are happy and tender moments and definitely Anon teasing Roseluck, I felt like I was anon, that's it something I would definitely do in Equestria, other than me asking Twilight to summon a Ferrari with her magic LMAO.

What had confused me was about the RGRE thing. I was like, what in the bloody hell is this? In addition to the fact that it was censored or Spoiled, I thought it was something taboo, something disturbing and when I finished reading the story, nothing happened, which confuses me why you put that and when I investigated it is about gender roles being inverted or something like that, I don't remember well, I don't know how dark that is, you'll tell me, but it would be a good idea to put the full name of that concept, so as not to confuse, I'm sure that not many know what that is.
And if the opposite is the case, leave it at that, I have total ignorance in this area.

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I left it spoilered since it's technically seen as 'fetishy' to some, but I can see what you mean. I probably should just keep it unspoilered.

There's a lot of good RGRE fics out there, but most of them are mature since it goes really into how sexually infused it can get in that version of Equestria. If you've never ran into until this fic, there's a good guy named Roshirat that I know of. I can't link you his fic since it's mature rated, but you'll be able to see it immediately on this profile. Read that fic if you want a more in-depth version of RGRE. This fic I wrote is very surface level when it comes to it.

EDIT: Also thank you for the compliment. I'm happy you enjoyed the fic overall. :twilightsmile:

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