Throughout your many days in Equestria, there has been one particular pony on your mind: Fluttershy. Today is the day you intent to do something about that, and so begins your mission of winning the heart of the yellow pegasus.
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Gypsy Writefag
I mainly write smut and some occasional PG-13 stuff.
Gypsy Writefag
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I LOVE IT!
Eh... not one of your stronger stories Gypsy.
Something about this felt... rushed. Incomplete.
Anon in this story isn't really likeable either.
Could just be me, but... yeah.
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Aye, there was a quite sharp change of direction as I wrote the story, which impacted the overall quality. Again, since it was live I couldn't edit and redo sections. It was fun nonetheless, but eh, bad stories happen.
I actually really enjoyed this story, I just wish there were more chapters.
Morre! I REQUIRE MORE TO THIS STORYY!! ...soo, yeahh. I seriously loved this story. A different twist to a love story, because it's a freakin' human in Equestria! I'd seriously love it if you put more chapters into this.
i really liked this
enough to give it a fav
it was short but very sweet and the emotions felt genuine
great job!
If I could burn down my house, murder my family and friends, bury them in a shallow grave, and then replace it all with this story I would do that. And it would totally be worth it. Especially if there was more.
You're very good at writing peoples feelings, it was very realistic
WOW very nice story. love the premise and everything!
left me wanting more though. see anons love increase for rose gradually
i was sad for both anon and roseluck and the irony of their situation. it seemed to work out for the best though.
I was only mildly depressed after reading this
Anon, you are the stereotypical anime hero who is oblivious to any and all feelings of love. And you make this fic perfect. True love is not a girl who is "perfect in every way!" True love is something between two imperfect people who are better than best friends. It's not easy to explain, but imagine two friends who do everything together, and multiply their feelings for each other by a thousand. That is true love (or at least in my eyes it is)
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That's really quite disturbing.
At first I was getting pretty pissed off at how you were treating Roseluck but it turned out well in the end
This story is like a drug and i'm addicted to it. Are there going to be more chapters?
Not the direction I expected this to go; rebound relationships don't tend to go well, so I don't see many stories about them