• Published 8th Oct 2012
  • 983 Views, 26 Comments

A Pierced Heart - Westphalian_Musketeer



Rarity finds herself falling for Pokey Pierce. Unforeseen events follow

Comments ( 10 )

The ending seems rather abrupt but otherwise a very nice and very well done story! You have my appluse.

Best of luck with the future.

1894650 Thank you, in the distant future (possibly over the summer) I'll write a story that will serve as a sequel to both this story and "Tending the Flock".

1894724 I haven’t actually read your other stories yet (I only jumped on this one because I’m a Changeling lover) but I’ll be sure to now. I honestly don’t think anyone else has done a Blueblood/Derpy shipping before.

Wow I read the whole thing in one sitting =D It was really good I liked how you played it out good work and thanks for recommendation.

1967901 You are a fast reader compared to me, glad to know you enjoyed it

wait, that's it!?! what happens next? :twilightoops:

3746208 Glad you enjoyed it, that was my first clop scene I ever wrote. Granted, I rewrote it once I got comfortable with it to improve it where I could.

There needs to be a sequel about the foal.

Fun fact: Pokey Pierce is Royal Pin.

Royal Pin actually loves to make clothes for his friends.

Rarity loves to make clothes too.

tl;dr They're perfect for each other.

Nice Story, but the end was a little bit sudden :pinkiegasp:

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