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jewelstealer


I'm Jewel! I am not new to MLP but I am new to writing fanfiction for it. I am practicing my writing and am open to constructive criticism. Looking for a proofreader.

Comments ( 14 )

quite an interesting story

Very amusing. Scoot aloof and Diamond Tiara are fillyfriends.

Scootaloo not Scoot aloof.

Would be interested in seeing this continued.

PiMan #6 · March 2nd · · ·

Rare case where I think we need a prequel, not necessarily a sequel.

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Maybe I will try my hand at writing smut for the first time if I make a prequel! :raritywink:

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I do think I could write a sequel to this about Apple Bloom exploring her sexuality with either Sweetie Belle or Silver Spoon. Afterall she just had her gay awakening what better way to follow that up then with her having some fun experimenting! :raritywink:

11839749 I got the sense that she was attracted to Diamond Tiara. Why not make it a threesome and include both Sweetie Belle and Silver Spoon? Or include Scootaloo and Diamond Tiara as well and make it a fivesome?

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I mean Diamond Tiara was definitely Apple Bloom's gay awakening it was very much implied she had an attraction to her so you aren't wrong! That's an interesting idea though. I think I like the idea of Diamond Tiara helping Apple Bloom explore her sexuality in a more risqué way. Then once she is done exploring maybe either a pairing between her and Sweetie Belle or a poly between her, Silver Spoon, and Sweetie Belle. I mean I just finished writing the prequel to this so honestly I don't know! I have so many ideas! :twilightsheepish:

11839853 Looking forward to it; :pinkiehappy:

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Well you are now in luck! I just finished writing the sequel! It has tad bit of cringey smut in it so beware lol!

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Cool. I'll check it out soon.

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