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Pinkiemlp97


A simple reader loves reading fanfiction but is considering making her own fanfics.

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Rainbow Dash agrees to meet up with her friends, but along the way the attitudes of two of her friends make her doubt if they are really just friends.



Based on the fanfiction cover
#Rarijack

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Looks like a couple of the pronouns got messed up in translation. There’s lots of he/him for the girls or referring to the wrong person during conversations.

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thanks for the correction I will review it tomorrow and I hope you liked it

I can tell from reading the color there is going to be some gas lighting going on

No se puede acabar asi, NO SE TIENE QUE ACABAR ASI!!!!

I really like this ship (I see them like that)

11820546
The truth is I'm thinking about doing a story later (chapters) something similar to "just friends" I have the idea and how it will go but I need to extend some more things like the secondary or tertiary characters that will appear, what they will do day to day such as doing activities or competition (the reason for this is because I think everything happens like a reality show)

11820474
You were right, I just checked it and every so often it says "she said" but when my browser automatically translates it into Spanish it doesn't come out like that... I was surprised how the translator can alter the story

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