• Member Since 28th Nov, 2011
  • offline last seen Feb 22nd, 2016

ObCom


I'm tempted to make an "arrow to the knee" joke here.

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Sequel to "Manhattan Ballad."

Humanized characters.

Vinyl and Octavia are back together, and the Reclamation is finally over, but now they are caught in the middle of a civil war as the Solar Empire tears itself apart. With order collapsing, and the furious Bass Leader hot on their trail, will the two survive?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 17 )

Ooooo... Sequel? Taco approves.

Looks good so far, can't wait for more

So, ObCom, when's more coming?:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

1621678 Can't even give an estimate. I have about 500-700 words already, but I'm busy with school and original stories/poems. I'd also like to fix that cover image first because it really annoys me.

1622388Ahh, the dreaded gauntlet of school work, I know the feeling. Well I can understand, and I'm sorry for bothering you about it. And why fix the cover? It's like your thing and is better than the google immages people use, you look like you put work into it. :pinkiesmile:

YYYYEEEEEESSSS!!!!! UPDATE!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Kewilouidillieao.

Make it were they live happily ever after? :pinkiehappy: By a lake with a small house living out the rest of there life. Just ideas.

1904654
I read this comment in the morning and it has stuck with me all day. I probably won't end the story with something like this, but I like the idea so much that I might write an alternate ending just to get the image out of my head. :heart::twilightsmile:

Never knew that my simple, basic idea could do something like this. :twilightsheepish: Thank you. :yay:
If your ending to the story is them dying then make it glorious like vinyl dropping the bass at the club with romantic stuff to make it were the people are close to crying but don't and in the end it makes the people think, this was truly an amazing ending! :pinkiehappy: :twilightsheepish:
Again ideas, crazy, insane ideas :pinkiecrazy:

MOAR!! NEKO-SAMA MISSES YOU ObCom!!!

Dark......so very dark.......I LOVE IT! MOAR! I DEMAND MORE!

2204890

You're gonna have to wait 3 months for the next part. :ajsmug::heart:

I'm glad to see you back!:heart:

RD

Hum Hum. Where are you? I am still waiting for a new chapter, and yet there is none! I have already read both stories twice! Where did you go?!?!?!?!?!?!?!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Please upload the next chapter soon.

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