Their world is ending.
In a cyberpunk-esque sort of futuristic world, Vinyl Scratch has reached a high point of her career, becoming the main attraction to the infamous CyberLink club, a fortress made of glass and neon lights. One day, the illusive owner of the club, a man named Bass Leader, calls Vinyl up to his office. He tells her two things: the augments that the majority of people have are causing widespread sterility and that he wants her to watch over his daughter, Octavia, who is pure flesh and blood.
However, when Empress Celestia tasks the fiercely loyal Rainbow Dash with finding the pure humans, is there any place to hide?
Chapters (13)
Looking really good so far, I can't wait for the next chapter
I Like how you've basically made : My Little Deus Ex: Augments are Magic
i like the plot so far really different from the other stories i read and interesting i like to see will this would lead
Please update!
I'd hate to be in that situation
honestly, i like this.
same i was in enjoying this
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Thanks guys, that's pretty refreshing to hear. I just hope you'll like the next, full part once I finish it (5 months from now! You thought it was part 5 because 5 comes after 4? Heck no, that's how long each part takes to plan out and write! ((don't take that seriously, I'm just joking around. I really am grateful))),
533565 Ur welcome i really enjoy Vinyl stories cause there alot u can do with her but this is the most unique i seen and i read alot
yaaaay! it's still going!
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This ain't endin' til it's ovah!
Or until it isn't any fun to write anymore, but I mean, come on, I'm writing with characters from an amazing show. It's always gonna be fun.
WOO new chapter no sleep for me tonight!
...by this time, i'd have enough guns to start WWIII
coo. new chapter.
Whoa
I should've written a warning about this earlier. Oh well, no time like the present. If you read Part 8 when it first came out and you have no idea what's going on, you should go back and re-read Part 8. I uploaded a little something extra at the end. Yes, it should've been uploaded as a complete package, but it was late and I just wanted to get it out. I apologize for uploading incomplete chapters and I won't be doing that again.
...you're a merciless bastard, you know that?
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The story had to get that "Dark" rating somehow
983862 *EPIC GENTLMAN GROIN KICK*
you deserve that.
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Since you've been following this fic for a while, I'd like to ask your thoughts on the romance in it. Halfway through, I was a little unsure if the TaviScratch pairing actually added anything, but I obviously went with it in the end. Do you think it was a good move?
And I have no doubt that I'm a bastard to these characters, but hopefully it makes for good reading.
No crotch kicks will stop me from putting hearts.
983888 when it comes to TaviScratch romance, i'm proballt th' wrong person to ask, because i'm following and reading most of th' onmes on FimFiction, and i've been proofing for a decently big one for months. it's one of mmy favorite story elements.
and besides, to quote my old roommate, "If you put two people together long enough, they'll either fall in love or try to kill each other, occasionally both."
loved it, thanks for writing.
Honestly the best humanized fic I've read and one of the best Octy Vinyl fics that I've read. Glad I found it!
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Can't say I was expecting any sorts of response for this, but when I saw these comments I very nearly teared up. Thanks so, so much for reading this fic til the end. There aren't enough little hearts, but have these anyway
i very much enjoyed this fic i cant to see the sequel
I have to agree very closely with Blank Flank, this is the second best Humanized fic that I've read.
Which is saying a lot as the only one ahead of it was a very long time in the making, had pre/proof readers both and happened to hit me in the feels hard due to memories pulled up by it.
All in all, really would like to see a sequel and very good fic!
Ignoring the sound, this is me
I wonder how Bass Leader will react to finding out Octavia's a les.
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That's what sequels are for!
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Darn you guys making me feel all warm and wuzzy inside with your kind words.
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Thanks for reading this through to the end, man. I feel honored to rank so highly on your list of Humanized fics, but now I'm curious to know what your number 1 is. I bet it's great!
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Yay! Sequels!
...Until this comment, I had no idea it was complete. I still find it awkward to think about Vinyl and Octavia making love with all those augments everywhere.
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If I could remember the title or the author I would tell you, I can remember everything else related to that story too!
Well, that was one fun ride.
don't know why but makes me remember of Babylon AD..
well better read to see what's going to happen
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I'm positive that anything with Vin Diesel is automatically better than anything I could ever write.
I don't about you guys, but Bass Leader just reminds me of the Illusive Man from Mass Effect
Je me sens une révolution qui va se passer
Pony time is when you separate the posers from the awesome pony time is when you say screw it it's time for ponies
This would look amazing as an anime.