"Creativity flows when boredom grows." -The Bored Author (of Doom)
This story is a sequel to The Cutie Alchemist
Starswirl the Bearded is no more. Luna is no more. Stygian is no more. They have all succumbed to the darkness, tainting the land in the process. Harmony is teetering, trying to find purchase after losing its Guardian. Will heroes rise to restore the balace?
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Some jazz bars specialize in craft cocktails, sophisticated cotail lounge or offer a curated wine list to enhance the dining experience.
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indeed, wine does enhance the dining experience
Hmmm. Intriguing prologue to this AU. Certainly liking the look at things from Celestia's POV while she was reflecting on family that has been either lost or was otherwise busy.
On to the next chapter.
So, you have some good dialogue with Granny Smith (especially when she was reassuring Celestia about Sunset). And then finding out either Rainbow or Lightning got Celestia to Nurse Redheart in time while Celestia was out cold was another great touch.
REALLY looking forward to more of this.
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Glad you enjoyed it! I'll be sure to somewhat speed up the process to get the next chapter out, lol
Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. REALLY like the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. And thanks also for the shout out in the author's notes. I appreciate THAT too. Anyway, really liked Granny Smith trying to help Celestia as well as appreciated that first meeting with Capper.
Definitely looking forward to more of this.
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Glad you're enjoying this!