wow, this IS rare. i get to be first to comment on a story and i found one that is actually well written and isn't smut or hate fodder. excellent work. i think i just found my 3rd favorite story. i will be following your development with great joy and zeil.
just do me one favor. don't let this wither on the vine and die like the last 12 well written disappointments that broke my heart. i know night's pain as well with good authors here as he does with his wife. what we both share in common? literature and love unrequited.
11809839 Chapter 4 and the Epilogue are actually already done, I'm just waiting to post it for a few days so the story gets a little more exposure on the updated stories tab. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm a big fan of stories that can have sex without necessarily being clop.
11809876 As am I, wordsmith. I do also enjoy stories with some nicely written sex without it being porn. My stories often have sex in them, but as a romantic aside from the main tale, and never the focus of the story. I prefer to tell tales and let the sex part function as a natural part of the tale. That said, I have been quite enjoying this tale of Twilight Velvet and Night Light in a more mature fashion, and simply not cheaters for the sake of cheating.
11809930 The next chapter may surprise you then. Let's say the twist is quite... unexpected. We get more of the details from Velvet's side of the story and Twilight's solution.
wow, this IS rare. i get to be first to comment on a story and i found one that is actually well written and isn't smut or hate fodder. excellent work. i think i just found my 3rd favorite story. i will be following your development with great joy and zeil.
just do me one favor. don't let this wither on the vine and die like the last 12 well written disappointments that broke my heart. i know night's pain as well with good authors here as he does with his wife. what we both share in common? literature and love unrequited.
well played my new friend, well played.
11809839
Chapter 4 and the Epilogue are actually already done, I'm just waiting to post it for a few days so the story gets a little more exposure on the updated stories tab. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm a big fan of stories that can have sex without necessarily being clop.
11809876
As am I, wordsmith. I do also enjoy stories with some nicely written sex without it being porn. My stories often have sex in them, but as a romantic aside from the main tale, and never the focus of the story. I prefer to tell tales and let the sex part function as a natural part of the tale.
That said, I have been quite enjoying this tale of Twilight Velvet and Night Light in a more mature fashion, and simply not cheaters for the sake of cheating.
11809930
The next chapter may surprise you then. Let's say the twist is quite... unexpected. We get more of the details from Velvet's side of the story and Twilight's solution.