Wow. The non-malicious neglect route was probably the saddest one you could take. If you had Velvet also enjoying and getting satisfied with her sessions with "Harvey", then just that could be enough to get me hyped for some vindication sex between Night and Twilight. Now I'm just sad, but maybe that's what you were going for.
11806320 I suppose it boils down to one thing: Do you believe that a mare can cheat on her husband for the 'good of her family'? If she can, then Night Light is overreacting. If she can't, then his anger is justified. Of course, a little conversation goes a long way.
Amusingly original, yes? Indeed, rather topical even.
Wow. The non-malicious neglect route was probably the saddest one you could take. If you had Velvet also enjoying and getting satisfied with her sessions with "Harvey", then just that could be enough to get me hyped for some vindication sex between Night and Twilight. Now I'm just sad, but maybe that's what you were going for.
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I'm glad that someone got the joke
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The story is tagged as sad and not porn, although chapter 3 will have clop in it.
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You know what. I didn't even notice. That's on me.
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I suppose it boils down to one thing: Do you believe that a mare can cheat on her husband for the 'good of her family'? If she can, then Night Light is overreacting. If she can't, then his anger is justified. Of course, a little conversation goes a long way.
Well now I'm a little curious as to if twilight will be in heat or not so she could time the divorce to have kids
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A very interesting question indeed. Normally. mares are only in heat during summer but with an alicorn... who knows? Well I do, heh.
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Oh no, she was always in the wrong. I was just expecting a sexier story and not one this nuanced.
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Hopefully Chapter 3 will be sexy enough for you.
Feel sad about the marriage ending. The consolation prize is cool though.
Okay I understand that some people might just be in it for the p*** but you absolutely have to write about where the guards give Harvey the lawsuit
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It's in there. Chapter 3 should be out today, or tomorrow at the latest.