• Member Since 10th May, 2012
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Veridian Phantom


Thunder Dash is my name, and writing is my game. (Sorry no, that's incorrect, it's actually music). But I do enjoy writing on the side.

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Octavia's past isn't mentioned often, or heard of for that matter. This story aims to change that.

This tale is of how Octavia has come to discover the melodious sound of the cello. And a very traumatic event is what started it.

A/N: This story ties in with chapter 5 of this story:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/44883/The-Master-Cellist

Picture by *Dreatos on deviantArt

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 22 )

I have a feeling you like Octavia.
Oh well, I'll put this on my read later list, I have some stuff to prepare for tomorrow.

I was really hoping this would be featured, problem is those who like it don't thumbs up. Making this dream of mine impossible :fluttercry:

This is rediculous, this is the best story i've ever written and it's got less views/thumbs/favs than all my other stories that are not as good. i'm gonna go cry in a corner:fluttercry:

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I know how you feel man, My stories don't really get many view either aside from Lonely Wanderer... It sucks when you write something that you're so proud of and then people don't thumbs up, but hey bro; this story is great and you should feel proud of yourself. Sometimes you just don't make it to the featured box... Most of my stories get like 100 views or so and then nobody ever reads them again... :raritycry:

That was heartwrenching! :raritycry:

Parents killed by muggers? Logical progression states that Octavia must now become the Batmare.
And hot damn, Octavia tears at my feels harder than any other pony could ever hope to. Well done, friend. Well done. :twilightsmile:

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This is quite the turn of events, considering i had finished reading your amazing story featuring Octavia, and i must say it was SPLENDID. Very well done indeed.

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Thank you, sir. I appreciate feedback, especially from a fellow author. I expect great things from you, my friend. Great things.

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o.O then wouldn't it be logical to read my other stories? if you've read one but expect great things then im guessing you dont know i have more than just this story?

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Hehe. Oops. Be right back.

The words an the the music together...just...:fluttercry: ... I don;t have words for how........*daps eyes from tear an claps*

Interesting... hints of batman. Lol.

Kinda changed my outlook. The other Octavia fic.

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hints of batman not intended. The other octavia fic is basically what this story is based off of, this is just her history which will be explained in chapter 5 of the other one.

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Ah, I understand. I just do like the other story a lot more, though. :3

This is one still good but is quite depressing.

True, true but it explains her keeping to herself, and how she obtained it. sorry for depressing, happens :|

well i must say, for a girl who wouldn't read fim fiction, this is a well written story. Though you did miss some capitalization and a few grammar errors, but hey, nobody's perfect. Besides, i copied and pasted it into Word anyways.

Octavia is my favourite pony of all time, and this story certainly did her justice.
While I say that, there are areas you could improve on (such as her recovery from her parents death. It seemed like she recovered too fast, and not enough depth was given to it) but it was an excellent story anyway.

thankyou good gentleman, for blessing me with this story,
-Fighting_oreo


PS. Where is our Octavia emoticon? In the meantime, have this one: :moustache: :twilightsmile:

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