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malfarious


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I'm about to read the story, but please for the love of God. Tell me why he looks like a cross between Static Shock and a Naruto character?

"Huge game of ninja"- Frikken called it.

So many walls of text i could make a house.

1387941 It looked cool and it was the closest pic i could get that would remotely even look like J. That isn't how he looks but you make due with what you got.

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Maybe it was my Dyslexia acting up, but I couldn't make it through this. The story seemed bland, the large walls of text made it hard to keep track, the character contradicts himself, it's hard to tell when he's talking and when he's not, maybe he was just thinking? I don't know, if he were just thinking to himself, I assume it would've been in italic. There's grammar issues, but nothing that I couldn't stand bare.

What better a place to die then in an abandoned building? I smirk a little at my terrible pun.

Not a diary however seeing how I am not some teenaged kid who wants to cry in her pillow sobbing about nobody loves them.

The path I walk is one of cold lonely tears.

Maybe I'm not a fan of dark fics, but this reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally bored me.

I immediately thought of Heat Guy J after reading the title, and the picture only adds to the irony.

Text walls are never fun. :twilightangry2:

y u no maek new chapter?!?!

1465487 im working on it i'm halfway done with it. Trust me with the new chapter there will be some broken jaws, flying teeth and tears.

1466082Good that means this is officially a party ( true story that happens at every party I go to)

1466256 I'd love to join the parties you go to sounds fun.

1492472 It only gets better seeing how J has such terrible luck he can't help but continuously get in trouble.

changed the picture got tired of the other one and I thought this one looks cooler.

apparantly rarity garbs her stuff

1546989 didn't see that one there thanks for the heads up.

1600373 and now for the real fun to start

Instant diabeetus

1687844 pssh sugar overdose, some men just can't handle their cupcakes.

1687917I can. I read it every other week.

then i applaud you good sir. *slow clap*

Why does he have no penis?

1735933 he's a eunuch. Can't say too much or that will delve into his history which will spoil a lot of the chapter's to come. Let's just say that you should listen to his master's words carefully. Any more of a hint and then i'd be telling you.

1735960 I guess it kinda makes sence because his master is "the void" and is thought to be genderless.

1735983 The Void is difficult to describe. He is pretty much the space that makes up everything. It is for lack of better words omnipotent in every sense of the way. I'll talk about his master later on but, i guess i could give you a little run down history of his master. His master lacks emotions and so to feel anything he requires souls. Souls are the very essence of a person and what makes them unique. The Void does not have a soul and so it's as if he doesn't truly exist.This is where things get weird. Before the anything existed, there was nothing. All that was there was just emptiness and space. However that space was The Void and at the time the only thing that ever existed. The creation of worlds and planets come from other dieties that appeared as time went on. How they came i'll leave for another time, i've ranted on for too long as it is. Just some side info for you buddy.

The void is the absence of both everything and nothing at the same time. It is the theoretical fifth demention. It is all and none inside the same stroke of the pen. To know the void is to know god. It is the singularity of everything that has, is and will be.

How was that?

1736228 That was perfect. Stick with me kid and we'll go places.

1736736 there'll be plenty of those in this story

1736987 oh there will be and with them one of my favorite side character's i've had the pleasure of writing. Let's just say he's like Discord, J and Pinkie's personality all mashed up into one person and then you'll have him.

1737108Sounds like one wrong move away from bluescreening the universe.

And the plot thickens...

1825813 oh we're just getting started mon ami. Next one you some more about J.

awesome story hope you keep the story going:pinkiehappy:

J is so freaking Badass :moustache:

Celestia is just Jelly of J's awesomeness :moustache:

Fucking Dumbass Princesses. J's FUCKING AWESOME

4919136 For future reference the 'tattoo's' are going to be explained later on down the road. If only to build more tension and to create more questions then you thought possible. All will be explained... eventually.

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