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I'm about to read the story, but please for the love of God. Tell me why he looks like a cross between Static Shock and a Naruto character?
"Huge game of ninja"- Frikken called it.
So many walls of text i could make a house.
1387941 It looked cool and it was the closest pic i could get that would remotely even look like J. That isn't how he looks but you make due with what you got.
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Maybe it was my Dyslexia acting up, but I couldn't make it through this. The story seemed bland, the large walls of text made it hard to keep track, the character contradicts himself, it's hard to tell when he's talking and when he's not, maybe he was just thinking? I don't know, if he were just thinking to himself, I assume it would've been in italic. There's grammar issues, but nothing that I couldn't stand bare.
Maybe I'm not a fan of dark fics, but this reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally bored me.
I immediately thought of Heat Guy J after reading the title, and the picture only adds to the irony.
Text walls are never fun.