Rarity has lost a chest of important gems on the Friendship Express. Rainbow Dash has only a minute to fly to the train and get it back. If she fails, Rarity's credit score will be ruined forever. Unless Rainbow tries again...
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...................This was........random to say the least
I shall read it later!!!
Hasbro if you're reading this please make this an episode in Season 3, this will be too funny!
Who's the real troll here, Twilight, Rarity, or RD?
I like this! LOL!
I love this. Don't ask me why, but I do.
Awesome Story. There should be a sequel to this.
An interesting style. Its a comedy and I lol'd, so this is a great fic as far as I'm concerned.
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The writers do not read fanfiction, if you pay attention to the panel they had at bronycon, they mention not reading fanfiction, and the way they say so makes it seem like company policy. Or I'm just misinterpreting things, in which case, if there are any writers reading this, I second this.
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I liked it. Kinda written in the style of that book... called something something 43rd dimension. I forget the name. :D
1381376 Wish they would, after all I've seen tons of fanfics that look like they would make great episodes.
Not that the offical seasons aren't good enough, far from it. 
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D, All of the above.
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Yes. Yes there should be.
my god... this... this is amazing.
Just got back from work and... Wow. I'm surprised and pleased by the positive feedback this is getting, though I'm a bit worried about the lack of constructive criticism that I usually get. But thank you all for the kind words.
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I have no idea how to make a sequel to this as it was meant to be a one-shot from the very beginning.
I could do a story with a similar style of writing, but I don't feel like I can add anything more to this particular story. Unless someone else here has an idea.
Lulz. Nice that you picked two ponies who get little on-screen interaction for this one. I think Rainbow and Rarity actually spoke more words to each other in this fic than they have during the entirely of the show itself.
Just nit-picking, but I seem to recall Twilight saying that you can only go back in time once. But for this story, I'll give it a pass.
EVERY SECOND MATTERS! KEEP PUSHING! DON'T BLINK!