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One day of relaxation.
Was it too much for Rarity to ask? Celestia knew she deserved it, having spent the past week fighting countless monsters and saving Equestria from certain peril many times. The new pool in town seemed like the perfect place to unwind and let her mind settle down, and that was all she needed.
Unfortunately for her, Rainbow Dash had other ideas.
Rated Teen for quite a bit of suggestive Rarity.
MerlosTheMad made me do this.
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Hehehehe
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Lol, Dash setting Spike up with Rarity XD
Of course.
Mm, dat cover art! (also your old profile pic)
I sense a Rainbow Dash!
I just love how the narration fits Rara's PoV perfectly.
Why is she so perfect?
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Yeah, I tried to make the event in the cover image a highlight of the story
yay Rarity butt! XD
Your Rainbow Dash senses are impeccable!
I dunno, it's just her style
Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed it!
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I really did! From the way the prose was catered to Rarity to the fufilling descriptions to the fact it was just so fun to visualize, this was very enjoyable.
It's not often that I favorite stories that are mostly without dialogue, but this one was a fun enough read that I'll give it a fave.
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Thank you very much!
6411691 You're welcome
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Rainbow Dash - Wingpony of the year, every year.
Cx Lol. Bored, much, Rainbow?
Nice little story ^-^ Ten muffins out of ten.
~SoDF
7034699 So many muffins... what am I gonna do with all these muffins?
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), I do this for most stories if I like them ^-^
^-^ You're experiencing my famous Muffin Rating (Well, I tell myself it's famous, eheh...
As for what to do with them? Build a castle, of course!!
Upon rereading this, it's just as fun as the first time.
I kind of wish there was a second chapter that was an epilogue of sorts that was just RD and Rarity talking to each other about what had just happened, but that's more out of curiosity of just what those two would say to each other than anything else.
You can has review!