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What happens when two long running friends, caught in a life changing argument about a certain cyan Pegasus they love, find out that the pony they're talking about is actually listening in on their quarrel?

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#1 · Dec 29th, 2011 · · ·

A very well written tale that realistically portrays a love triangle between close friends. It really moved me especially the end of the story with the scene between Aramis and Dash.

Not bad, I enjoyed it. I like how... Realistic it was. Short and sweet. Good work, and I look forward to more!

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Thank you very much for the comment and for the watch! I really appreciate it! :rainbowlaugh:

Lovely, but you simply MUST replace "human" with something. It distracted me through the entire reading.

Wow, talk about you bringing back bad memories. This was really well done. I've been in love triangles before and I always got the bad end of the deal. Wow. Awesome story, it really touched me because I know how the unnamed character felt.

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This has inspired me to write a full story which is also on my account called "Looking on the Inside"

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