I like writing stories but I'm also a kinky fetishistic loser, that's all you need to know really.
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Da FAK?
What in the heck...
Probably worth adding character tag(s) for the colts. The names of they're in the list, or just Other if they aren't.
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No problem.
An okay start. You kinda let a run on sentence take over at the end with little care. Lol.
Am editor wouldn't be remiss.
I love these types of stories!
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Don't like don't read. Blacklist
Great ending lucky colts
Lol. The story is a mess but it's good for a starter fiction in the genre.
Grammar was terrible and the sex was a bit contrived, but the ending was okay, I guess.