Three's a Party

Dan

Dan #1 · Sep 13th, 2023 · 2 · 2 · Chapter 1 ·

Incest? Damn, and I was looking forward to this sequel...

I'm not completely against it, but Fluttershy? Ew... She's too pure for that sort of thing. Even if it is common in the animal kingdom and she knows it.

coopda

coopda #2 · Sep 13th, 2023 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 1 ·

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is it a sequel tho? it doesn't say so in the description. probably forgot to add it

The Archiver

The Archiver #3 · Sep 13th, 2023 · 3 · · Chapter 1 ·

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I think it was for "Opposites Attract"

Black--Soul

Black--Soul #4 · Sep 13th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

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Holy... This was amazing ♡ Glorious clop.
That was a magnificent read ~♡

Some Leech

Some Leech #5 · Sep 13th, 2023 · · · Chapter 1 ·

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Fixed

Some Leech

Some Leech #6 · Sep 13th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

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It's not done yet
Got chapter 2 going up tomorrow and chapter 3 going up wednesday

Zake

Zake #7 · Sep 13th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

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its hear!

Black--Soul

Black--Soul #8 · Sep 14th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

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Nice
Very nice ♡

Alzrius

Alzrius #9 · Sep 14th, 2023 · 5 · · Chapter 2 ·

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“Ass down, face up,” he huffed.
Her ears perked up, her tail flicked to one side, and she did a double take. “W…what?”
“Ass down, face up,” he repeated, softer and slower this time.

Pretty sure he means "Face down, ass up."

Some Leech

Some Leech #10 · Sep 15th, 2023 · 3 · · Chapter 2 ·

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Jezus

Yeah, I must've had a stroke
Thanks for pointing that out
I fixed it

PrincePegacornV

PrincePegacornV #11 · Sep 15th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

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Good story, Leech. I always enjoy your stuff. While I am not that much in favor of Zephyr Breeze, finding him just a jerk in many ways canon-wise, I will let it go and simply delight in your prose. Thanks for the chapter, and looking for more...

PuzzleMaster98

PuzzleMaster98 #12 · Sep 15th, 2023 · 2 · · Chapter 2 ·

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I have no idea how I missed that either

Some Leech

Some Leech #13 · Sep 15th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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My pleasure
Glad you enjoyed it

shinybob606

shinybob606 #14 · Sep 15th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

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I may be wrong about this but couple things

waste a few bets

Should that be bits?

more heavenly as the first

Given its more shouldn't is be more than the first rather than as

I loved the first story and found Tempest and Zephyr to be a great ship so liking the sequel, the world needs more Tempest

Some Leech

Some Leech #15 · Sep 15th, 2023 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Amended

Drathus

Drathus #16 · Sep 15th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

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Quite lovely to read! Great job on this one! Definitely going into my favourites!

Alzrius

Alzrius #17 · Sep 15th, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

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Got chapter 2 going up tomorrow and chapter 3 going up wednesday

Looks like Wednesday arrived early!

Black--Soul

Black--Soul #18 · Sep 18th, 2023 · 4 · · Chapter 2 ·

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Definitely one for the favorites ♡
But real incest is dangerous
Good that it's just fiction

coopda

coopda #19 · Sep 21st, 2023 · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

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are the eyes of your profile pic squinted shut near the top of the frame? or is the entire brighter section giant untextured heart-shaped eye voids?

Drathus

Drathus #20 · Sep 21st, 2023 · 2 · · Chapter 3 ·

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Just big untextured voids :D

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #21 · Sep 25th, 2023 · 2 · · Chapter 3 ·

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Very nice! Though I still can’t quite get over how it’s all happening to Zephyr.

Also, lol, I wish there could have been a bit more attention to their swollen teats during the sex. It was really hot when they were mentioned in the beginning, but it would be nice to see them getting groped or see them sucked on or jiggling during sex. Or maybe even a bit of tit-fucking during the warmup? Seems like buildup with no payoff in that sense.

Oh, and kind of a missed opportunity for a little mare-on-mare action, especially between Dash and Fluttershy. Would have been really nice to see Fluttershy kissing Rainbow when they were both on top of him, for example. Or maybe Dash playing with Fluttershy’s huge teats while getting rutted.

Oh well. Guess you can’t have everything. That would make it too perfect! (So, who will be the next addition to his harem in the mandatory sequel?)

Some Leech