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    (A pony version of) Daniel Tosh reviews internet videos created by Equestrian citizens. Hilarity ensues.

    This will include inappropriate humor. This is Daniel Tosh after all. You have been warned.

    Tosh.0 belongs to Comedy Central and Daniel Tosh.

    First Published
    1st Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    8th Dec 2012

    Comments ( 98 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Formatting just like a real episode and the jokes were decent, not bad. Take a thumb. :yay:

    Silver out!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awesome.  The Emperor approves

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Not bad. Had me laughing at some parts. A very ambitious idea, to say the least. Very hard to pull off, but you're doing a good job so far. :moustache:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    *Blinks* I wonder what Tosh's cutie mark would be....

    Also, excellent work. Some of the jokes were... Meh. But it's good overall.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Nice. Combine two of my favorite things and you get a like, fav and a track. Keep it up!

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This was actually more creative and well-written than I thought it was going to be.

    Captures the essence of Tosh.0 and transposes it over MLP very nicely, even though the styles don't match, at all.

    I think that's part of the charm, though.

    I'll be keeping an eye on this.

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I thought it had it's moments over all but it needs a few more jokes and to sound a little less insulting. Tosh does puns not put downs which are similar but not the same. Good work though.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1368824

    Puke. Definitely puke.

    I really like this. Tracked and faved. Hope to see more!

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is so awesome. Would you mind if I stole this idea and wrote some episodes? :rainbowlaugh:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    That was awesome.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369157

    Agreed. There must be puke.

    Overall, good scripting, but the jokes came off as not 'racist' (read as 'Tosh')

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Must track because Tosh.

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369257

    I kind of mind, but I don't have any control over it. If you write an episode better then me, then I can't really complain.

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369630

    Needs more racism? xD

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #17 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Funny thing. I love the Tosh.0 for the opening videos, but I don't like most of the web redemption crap.

    I will follow and like.:pinkiehappy:

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369979

    Some of the Redemptions are funny. I honestly haven't watched a Tosh.0 episode in a year or so, before the one that I watched that inspired this fic.

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Indeed, well you have missed quite a few good ones, sir. :twilightsmile: Also if your going to write Tosh.0 fic, you might want to watch it for some ideas, but it's just a suggestion.

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    What about dick of the week?:raritydespair:

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Is good but not enough lols.

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1369906

    Can't write for Tosh without offending half of the world :rainbowlaugh:

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1370112

    Completely agree.

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    You could've named it Big Macintosh.0, but okay.

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Pretty nice if I say so myself, which I do :moustache:

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 22h ago · · ·
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    Good news its just like Tosh.0

    Bad news its just like Tosh.0

    I like his stand up, but the show sucks.

    Nice pony representation.

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 22h ago · · ·
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    >>1369902

    Well I certainly wouldn't do anything like that without the original concept's author's blessing. I just think it's a great idea (so make more!) and it inspires me with so many funny ideas of my own. But I'd much rather respect an author than put out something that probably wouldn't be as good anyway. :pinkiehappy:

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1371039

    Spoiler alert, I was planning on doing a "45 minute" Stand up Fic.

    I agree with you... Partially.

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 19h ago · · ·
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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: OH GODS MY SIDES!!! I freaking loved this!!! Please make some moar?:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 18h ago · · ·
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    >>1371833

    Refer to my blog post: I will be making moar.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 18h ago · · ·
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    LOVE IT!!!!!!!! 5 crazy pinkies out of 5 :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 18h ago · · ·
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    This...

    This.

    You do realize that when Tosh finds out about this...

    Otherwise, excellent.

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 18h ago · · ·
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    >>1372298

    I could never do it the way that he does. I hope he doesn't find out... He would write his own fic and embarrass the shit out of me...

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 16h ago · · ·
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    Just needs a bit more vids, since Daniel does like 8.

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 16h ago · · ·
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    >>1372849

    I had to think of all the vids off of the top of my head xD

    I will definitely keep that in mind.

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 15h ago · · ·
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    Hmmm...  a rating clash like this can only mean one out of two things: either this story has legitimate entertainment value and a shit ton of Tosh haters, or this story has a shit ton of Tosh lovers and  is hastily written. I... I must know... I'm like a moth to the flame, damn you writer! Damn you for preying on my easily piqued curiosity!

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 15h ago · · ·
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    >>1373090

    Ego is telling me that the clash is because Tosh is kind of a douche, and bronies don't like him. But at the same time, maybe I didn't have funny enough jokes.

    Mind is telling me that I could have written it better, but I wrote it at 3 AM, so that's partially my fault. I think it's okay

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 15h ago · · ·
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    ^^

    The answer is both. Maybe there are not enough people here that hate Tosh. I've read enough stories to know stuff like this is usually 50/50 easy :ajsmug:  .....Or negative nuked to February 33rd, which doesn't exist:ajbemused:  (cookie for the reference)

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 15h ago · · ·
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    Now how do I contact Daniel Tosh with this link.....

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 15h ago · · ·
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    >>1373171

    If he references me, I will probably blow my load in my pants.

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 15h ago · · ·
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    VERDICT Dude, that was funny as fuck. Simply written but for good reason. This was charming, very Toshish without going into the cheap grasping-at-straws  jokes that seem to have plagued the more recent seasons. I like it! MOAR:flutterrage:

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 15h ago · · ·
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    >>1373182

    Yay! Good stuff! I guess I have to do moar.

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 14h ago · · ·
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    >>1368824

    Probably a ".0". Lol.

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 9h ago · · ·
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    Awsum. I liked the jokes some and the rainbow mane one was excellent. You really do describe how I think Daniel would act :rainbowlaugh:

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 9h ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:I can't wait for episode 2!:pinkiehappy:

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 33w, 9h ago · · ·
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    I think that you're the first author to have used Tosh.0. Well done.

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 6d ago · · ·
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    PLEASE GIVE ME MORE :yay::yay::yay::yay:

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 5d ago · · ·
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    The jokes were hilarious.  “I could have just trained her by kicking her in the c(beep).” That made me LOL :rainbowlaugh: Can't wait to read episode 2 you really pulled off the Tosh.0 experiance.

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Me gusta. I really like this, but too many simple curse jokes. but the "I made Scootaloo cluck like a chicken" I gotta give you props, that was bucking genius. Yeah, like the "I could've kicked her in the *beep*" style jokes, only 2 or so are usually in his episodes.  And by those types of jokes I mean jokes that, well, arent clever really.... but they fit in sometimes

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1373176

    He would probably read excerpts and create a bit just for this. But he also might offer you a job if this was good enough.

    I don't know I haven't found time for this, I will look at it tomorrow.

    If he does, he will reference how easy you are.

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1396801

    I doubt he would go that far.

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1397674

    Wait wait wait, you doubt Tosh would go that far. Did he not state in a stand up special that he loves to start with a funny joke, and not stopping until only one audience member understands what the F**k is going on.

    He will go until he stops having fun, and then he might still come back to it.

    #53 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399206

    This is true, but I'm sure he already finished the season that is currently airing. So if I was acknowledged, it would probably be just a post on his blog. And I'm kind of scared to be acknowledged by him. To be honest. He has a decent amount of writers, and if I were to be even approached by him, I would probably drop dead of a heart attack. I love him, but at the same time, I'm terrified of him.

    #54 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp:

    Quest added!

    :scootangel:

    #55 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399253

    Wait... what?

    #56 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #57 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399263

    I don't like that face. What the fuck does that mean?

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399271

    :pinkiehappy: = how I feel

    :twilightoops: = how you feel

    :trollestia: = how Tosh feels. We will have to see whether he would be more amused by ignoring me, or mentioning you.

    Either way I need to read this first, probably tomorrow.

    Note: I wont mention this if you really don't want me to. But if he has a 50/50 chance of finding out, would you not rather he found out... actually you probably don't want him to find out that way. NM I'll be nice.

    #59 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399291

    I would like if he found out. I just don't want him coming to my door and being like, "Sup. Are you the sweaty nerd that wrote a fanfic about me?"

    #60 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399299

    :facehoof: OHH.

    No he might do a 10 minute running joke in a stand up routine, but he is way to lazy to hunt you down. Though I guess he might message you to do a bit or redemption on the show... Your family and friend know your a brony, right?

    JK he would probably respect you wishes if you don't want to be known.

    #61 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399339

    They know I'm a brony. Oh well. Let's both message him and see what happens.

    #62 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399360

    Sure, tomorrow.

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    lol

    mare's hand.

    hard trouble.

    I think you need a editor sir.

    #64 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1399439

    Probably. There's also the fact that I wrote that at 3 am in the morning. That probably affected the story :pinkiecrazy:

    #65 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #66 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1368824

    ... a douche-bag  :unsuresweetie:

    #67 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Fucking funny :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

    #68 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hahahahahahaha!!!! OH gods my sides!!!

    #69 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is how its done

    #70 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    this is horrible.....MAKE MOAR!!!:flutterrage:

    #71 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Discord next for the whole "chocolate rain" thing

    #72 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    By Odin's magnificent chest hair, that was brilliant!

    #73 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1402760

    Thank you very much <3

    I was hoping my second chapter would be better than the first.

    #74 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1402767 yeah

    i like writing/read/watching comedy, im working on a new comedy fic too.

    #75 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Meh, you need to not use the main charcters form the show to much. aka make them funny things about ponies, like a earth colt learning to brush for the first time. Maybe add in some other races.

    But just using ponies form the show really takes away from your potential. As do the "repeats" that he apparently reuses.

    You could start using famous OC's, or ponies from stories you read.

    Conclusion: worth a chuckle every now and then but it needs to word at being unique.

    Good concept though, and the transitions between tosh and the clips was done well.

    #76 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1404433

    Noted. Thank you for the constructive criticism.

    #77 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 12h ago · · ·
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    This was better than the first episode. :twilightsmile:

    Silver out!

    #78 · Chapter 1 · 31w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Brilliant!

    #79 · Chapter 2 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Has it...

    No...

    It can be...

    It's gotten funnier! The first fic Ive seen to improve upon itself, nice work.

    #80 · Chapter 2 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1452574

    Yay! I was hoping that the second would be better than the first. No pressure Vicodin... No pressure... :pinkiecrazy:

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 26w, 2d ago · · ·
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    All you need to do is take out the scenes where it says the audience is laughing (except it it pertains to a joke, like when he would go 'aw, like you never did that' after the audienc goes Aawwwwww). I actually tried this format before by using jeff Dunham, although that was years ago...and totally sucked. But this was really good XD KUDOS!

    #82 · Chapter 2 · 26w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1635383

    Noted. Thank you for the input!

    #83 · Chapter 2 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Did you see Fluttershy's vagina on Tosh.0? :rainbowkiss:

    #84 · Chapter 2 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1655248

    I haven't watched the show in forever x.x

    #85 · Chapter 2 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1655305 Check Equestria Daily :moustache:

    #86 · Chapter 2 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1655368

    Can't find it. Link?

    #87 · Chapter 2 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #88 · Chapter 2 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1655501

    Holy. Shit. Of course now the bronies are going to blow it out of proportion... sigh.

    #89 · Chapter 2 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #90 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I did not rage. I laughed!:rainbowlaugh:

    #91 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1762929

    His video was tasteless. But I laughed... so...

    #92 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1762929 I fucking died for a second when he said that on TV...god i raged then I laughed then I raged again...:twilightangry2:

    #93 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Tosh found out. As expected.

    #94 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1763720

    About bronies? Not that hard to find.

    #95 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    My reactions:

    GAK GAK GAK

    HAIL THE MIGHTY SMOOZE!

    #96 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1763799: Eh. I didn't expect he'd really pull enough time to do that. I just wonder where he found out from.

    #97 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1764128

    Um... fucking anywhere? Bronies are everywhere. Especially Reddit...

    #98 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1764214: Fair enough.

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