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I'm interested to see where this is going ^^
Wished there are more Wolfenstein crossover stories
I got some several questions to ask after I finished reading the two chapters.
And I have been a long time fan to Doom/Wolfenstein/Quake for a very long time.
And ironically, I completely finished Old Blood a few days ago. And I'm now in the middle of playing Wolfenstein: New Order this week. ( And later on, New Colossus. While Youngblood will be a hard maybe to play. )
Before the questions, I can see that you choose the Wyatt Timeline for this story. Personally, I like Fergus than the poor kid. No offense.
One; Was it really necessary to nearly destroy his entire weapon arsenal like that? Didn't he get "teleported" to Equestia before he crashed to the ground?
I mean, he still got his power suit intact. But not his weapons!?
And Two; Turning him into a pony, but the Nazis still got their human forms!? That seems unfair.
And another confusing issue is the fact that his stallion body works, compared to his poor broken human body?
How did the magic dimensional portal fix that?
Thirdly, I'm guessing that the Nazis from Equestria are actually the ones that were once killed by BJ himself in the past. But for some stupid reason, there are all somehow revived, but teleported to Equestria for some crazy reason!?
I mean, the once-dead Major General
Wilhelm "Deathshed" Strasse is somehow back, so it won't take a guess on how/why those once-dead nazi soldiers/goons are back in the same way.
And finally, the fourth question; How long was Deathshead and his Nazi goons been to Equestria? How long did it take for them to conquer and beat the ponies? And possibly the other non-pony kingdoms?
Did Deathshead's "toys" ( The many super soldiers, and robots ) that BJ destroyed are also come along to Equestria too?
An interesting idea you got there, i did Crossovers of the wolfenstein games myself
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I can only agree, my first works were wolfenstein Crossovers
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One: He did... but the teleportation and transformation into a pony happened in midair, and his momentum carried over between dimensions. His guns all broke as a bit of a nod to how, at least in W:TNO, the arsenal doesn't carry over between levels. Plus, I wanted Wyatt to be the survivor in this but wanted B.J. to use the LaserKraftWerk rather than the DieselKraftWerk, and having it break with all the other guns was not only a way to get the best of both worlds, but it also was a great excuse to bring in an 'improved' LaserKraftWerk based off the one seen in Wolfenstein: Youngblood (say what you want about that game, it does do some pretty interesting things with the weapon upgrade system). As for why the suit survives but his guns don't, that's because of superior Da'at Yitude engineering.
Two: That's something that will be addressed later in the fic. I will say that the Nazis get human bodies because they weren't brought to Equestria the same way B.J. was. As for why the bodily damage he suffered as a human didn't carry over to his pony body, do yourself a favor and just chalk that up to magic. If B.J. ever goes back to his old body, though, he might be in for a bit of an unpleasant surprise...
Three: Deathshead is the only Nazi who's back from the dead. How did that happen? Let's just say that while we were shown his body, we weren't shown his head. It's perfectly valid to assume that his head was destroyed by the grenade, but it's also possible that B.J. was briefly knocked unconscious by the blast, and someone came in and removed Deathshead's head while he was out. And Deathshead is notorious for ripping out people's brains...
Fourth: Deathshead ended up in Equestria not long after his presumed death, and conquered it about a month or two afterward, once he perfected the anti-magic field tech. I've left the amount of time he's been in control ambiguous in order to avoid accidentally contradicting anything in the timelines, but if you go off of the Wolfenstein timeline --assuming no timey-whiny shenanigans-- he's been in control for about a year now.
Finally, while all the "toys" B.J. broke weren't fixed and brought to Equestria, Deathshead made up for it by bringing in some new minions and making some improvements to his technology. The new LaserKraftWerk didn't just magically pop into existence, after all...
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Tell that to gravity when he fell down from that huge height in canon.
Oh don't tell me that once he gets back, his old body is still broken and messed up. And somehow his suit will get destroyed, will still be captured, kangaroo trialed, and "executed".
If those other Nazi goons AREN'T the ones that were killed by BJ from the past, like Deathshead was. Then, where were they even come from?
And that was a very hypothetical theory you come up with?
Because, I highly doubt it's valid. Considering the fact that the grenade is literally right in his hand, and I doubt that his head or even his brain is fully intact.
Okay, BJ can get new weapons for himself. Don't know how Twilight and her friends will ever learn how to use a gun or have the will to kill.
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The former's definitely a possibility. The latter? Well, I have plans for the Da'at Yitude suit that don't involve it getting destroyed (keep in mind that B.J. isn't using it anymore now that he doesn't need it to walk), and continuity's already been sent careening in an entirely different direction. Besides, I'm not that cruel.
Keep in mind that this story is still in progress. A lot of these questions are going to be addressed as it progresses. For now... well, let's just say that a few members of Deathshead's Commandos (a handful escaped his fortress before it got nuked) are back on earth, recruiting troops for a little "extradimensional exploratory mission".
Let's just say that stranger things have happened, in both reality and the Wolfenstein series. Keep in mind that in W:TNC, B.J. gets decapitated, and not only survives but gets a snazzy new supersoldier body out of it.
As a general rule, Twilight and her friends won't need to learn how to use guns; they have other methods of fighting back. As for the will to kill bit... the next chapter is going to spotlight how Twilight develops that.
This is coming from THE guy that actually loves killing the Nazis ( For a very good reason. ) by the thousands?
I hate to say it against William/BJ, but what he says not only sounds a little hypocritical coming from him of all people, but also sounds freaking stupid if you think about it?
I somehow got the march song in my head because of the trailer of Wolfenstein TNC.
I am interested in this
I wonder if there is one of my favourite robots in this, the Zitadelle
He shouldn't "stumbled backward". He's no random protagonist. He's William Joseph "B.J." Freaking Blazkowicz! He shouldn't be "scared" by her emotional outburst.
He would have calmed her the f*** down! Or even slapped her to get a damn grip!!!
I mean, it worked when he "calm down" Wyatt in the very first mission in the New Order.
Twilight should apologize in the next chapter.
Jeez, total Deja Vu much?
Stupid ass question. BOTH worlds would definitely be better off without the Nazi ruling. I can tell ya that much.
Wow? Even you? No offense, it's just that this is coming from a guy that is a total expert at killing Nazis around the thousands.
And it's also a ancestor to another badass that kills demons for eons.
What do you mean by that?
You sadly still don't get it, Twilight. There are just that kind of people or group that enjoys and enforce this messed up shit.
If you had knew what these Nazis have done to their original alternate Earth of Wolfenstein ( Where BJ also comes from. ).
You never understand true cruelty until you tragically see it right in front of you.
Then, and only then. will you have finally realized that you have no choice but to kill than rather make "peace and understanding" with the Nazi Regime.
Sure, they're GOOD Germans that don't agree or don't want to be a Nazi. But so far, saldy there are a miniscule group.
Nicely done! And Pardon about my last comment, old habit
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I kinda have to disagree. He hates nazis enough to want them dead, yes, but if you pay attention to his dialogue and a few choice cutscenes (particularly the imagined/hallucinated ones), you'll notice that deep down, he wants a peaceful, normal life, and seems more driven to kill Nazis by the (very justified) feeling that he has to in order to make a peaceful, normal life possible for everyone else than any love for the activity.
Yeah, B.J. getting scared by Twilight's emotional outburst does seem a bit out of character... until you consider the fact that that emotional outburst was paired with a magical outburst, and that a handful of seconds ago, a different magical outburst from Twilight blew the head off of a Nazi, and a Nazi in Da'at Yitude-derived power armor to boot.
B.J. isn't just talking about killing nazis here; he's talking about killing in general. Also, keep in mind that Twilight's never really been faced with a kill-or-be-killed situation until this point.
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What do you think I mean by that?
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Yes, there's going to be killer robots aplenty... and they'll have acquired some new tricks to boot.
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COOL!
i think you still did well
Still, nice work!
nice chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Shining, you bloody idiot!!!!
How the hell is he the "Captain of the Royal Guard"!? If he is acting like a naive pacifist or rookie that just finished training!?
He ain't no real soldier if he is like this! Heck, the entire "royal guard" are a bunch on pansy crybabies if they're the same!!!
They all wouldn't survive seconds in a regular battlefield.
William is a goddamn American Hero!
Twilight, I can't believe I'm saying this. But you need to knock some damn sense on your brother. And get his "real soldier" persona and training to show up.
Those TYPES of Ponies and "American" Citizens that gleefully accept the Nazi's viewpoints are all f**king traitors!
Hope that when this is all over, and Equestria is finally liberated. Those traitors will get their just desserts.
SPIKE!!!???
Author, what did you do!?
P.S. Anyways, I'm somewhat glad that Blueblood of all ponies is being a "good guy" here?
P.S.S. That Nazi-created Mechanical Dragon is so fire.
This is so frickin deja vu!!??
Especially that sewage mission under Nazi Berlin with all of the old city wreckage while driving that mini-submarine boat.
Okay, this is getting ridiculous? Did you give Rarity the foresight to make William's old GI flight jacket in new order?
Crazy coincidence!?
So deja vu. And Deathshead doesn't have a better reason to just call it sometime else or new?
Better late than never and your german is on point.
I kinda wonder if there could be a soldier sympathizing with the ponies, or is spared by blascowitz due to being young or something. Just popped in
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There might be soldiers who sympathize with the Equestrians; the inverse is true, after all…
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Well, i am german myself, thus that thought, plus i did exactly that in my wolfenstein Story, twice.
Plus, had to think of how blascowitz spared that soldier when asking for the bike keys
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Yeah, they wouldn’t survive in a regular HUMAN battlefield, but a regular equestrian battlefield, in my headcanon, differs wildly from a human one. While Shining and the Royal Guard aren’t crybabies, they’re native to a Sugar Bowl world where the only ponies who knowingly and intentionally kill sapient beings are outright evil, and even then never do so as frequently as B.J. does. Guardsponies can fight, sure, but their training doesn’t go over how to kill, because until the Nazis showed up the Royal Guard could use magic to subdue threats non-lethally and didn’t need to kill.
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1: Yeah, the enthusiastic Nazi supporters who aren’t faking it to avoid being suspected of being traitors will get their just desserts when this is all over.
2: Something similar to what a certain mad scientist did to a certain man who B.J. couldn’t save. Spike managed to keep his free will, though.
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1: Rarity didn’t make the jacket, though the pony who did was a close friend of hers, and worked in the fashion industry as well. She was inspired by something she saw on the shelves of a certain enchanted comic book shop…
2: Yes. “Totenkopf”, as he calls himself, figured that he didn’t need to bother with coming up with an original name.
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1. Good!
2. Poor Fergus. Ironic that he is the one I save first, before Wyatt in a different timeline playthrough.
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Well not anymore, due to the Nazis screwing up another world to their twisted desires.
Those ponies should man the f**k up and be like Twilight of taking down the Nazis, permanently.
Just like those familiar situations with the nasty Caribou from Fall of Equestria World. Or the villainous and diabolical versions of the Zebras from "Zebradom" Universe.
P.S. if Shining, Twilight, Spike, and the others managed to hear BJ's full story of what the Nazis truly did to his world in both World War II and the last 15 years.
I have very good feeling that hearing all of that, will not only horrify and traumatize them so much at the utter evil of the Nazi Empire.
But this might be the they need the kick they need to finally become badasses.
Maybe this would also utterly erased the potential misanthrope BS that might come to BJ's way if they know his real identity.
But after hearing that, they should realize they would be no better than the Nazis themselves for heavily discriminating the entire human race, for just a big group of evil people.
And the fact that even some of their pony "friends" become traitors themselves, so there's that.
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1. Still, it is a weird coincidence.
2. Finding it hard to believe to see the very imaginative, brilliant but very twisted mind like Deathshead that created all of those mechanical and cyborg/super soldier monstrosities for the Nazi Empire.
Is a little lazy not to come up with something that isn't a rehash to familiar places that BJ already went through?
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Yeah, they’re going to learn, and they’re going to learn fast.
As nice as that would be, it’s also unrealistic. As B.J. points out, ponies who’ve suffered at the hands of the Nazis have only that very narrow facet to judge humanity through, and you can’t exactly blame them for assuming it applies to every human. And just like in real life, some of those ponies are going to listen to their emotions rather to reason when confronted with evidence to the contrary. That’s gonna be the case with the next member of the Mane 6 that Twilight, B.J., and co will find, unfortunately.
Keep in mind that Deathshead developed a lot of those things by reverse-engineering Da’at Yitude Artifacts. While he is a genius, my personal headcanon is that his genius manifests itself as a talent for understanding, utilizing, and combining existing innovations in clever and unorthodox ways rather than coming up with new stuff wholecloth.
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BJ's going to teach them a very hard lesson about that, and will not deal with their BS either!!!
P.S. I forgot to ask you this, but I don't think you added Twilight to ever apologize to BJ about what happened a while ago!?
Oh yeah, most of their "new toys" did come from a ancient jewish society of all things.
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I'll probably work that into the rewrites of the earlier chapters.
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