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Day in the Life

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VDNKh

VDNKh #1 · Dec 28th, 2011 · · · The Cello ·

Beautifully written, I want moar!

lemonsrcool #2 · Dec 28th, 2011 · · · The Cello ·

where did u get that image... i want...

JasonTheHuman #3 · Dec 28th, 2011 · · · The Cello ·

Your descriptions are very nice, as is the writing in general. You switched between verb tenses, though, so you should watch that. Also, "cello" shouldn't be capitalized.

Overall, a nice and simple tribute to one of the more interesting background ponies.

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