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"Yona had wanted to go smash Cozy's room for making Ocellus feel bad. It was only Ocellus begging her not to which had made stayed her hoof. It was this kind of thing which reminded Yona of why yaks were the best at being smart. Other creatures got caught up in strange ideas, about when it was or was not appropriate to smash something."

Okay, that was a hilarious paragraph :pinkiehappy:
Poor Ocellus. I'll choose to believe she went back to the Hive temporarily, for some soul-searching. Strange how the fic is marked complete, but the chapter is just called Act 1...

Does Cozy hate Ocellus for a specific reason or is she just a psychopath?

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Sorry that was my mistake. The fic is not complete there is another chapter coming with a lot more context.

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Oooh! In that case, faved! I look forward to seeing more!

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Psychopathy would mean Ocellus would notice a complete absence of empathetic emotion from Cozy. It would become noticeable after a while, though I suppose this could be set early enough that Ocellus didn't see... Or Cozy made sure to keep out of Ocellus's sight when she knew she SHOULD be feeling empathy...

Short but sweet(?) story :) And a chapter 2 faster than expected, nice! :twilightsmile:
This was a fun read. Thanks for writing it :pinkiehappy: I really do feel like people tend to treat Cozy as too innocent in most fics she's in :rainbowhuh:... This was a refreshing exception :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for the support!

Cozy facing the same ugliness and wickedness she wished to inflict on non-ponies…. But 1000 fold?…. That’s a pretty dark yet oddly fitting end…. Makes me wonder…. Did Ocellus realize what she unleashed on that twisted filly?

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