As Cozy Glow, Queen Chrysalis and Lord Tirek are about to take control on Equestria, their plan is ruined but soon revived with many questions along the way...
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why did the villains decide to help defeat the Grogar at all? They could just warn the heroes with an anonymous letter and watch from afar as the heroes defeat him. And now they not only lost the element of surprise by revealing themselves, but also voluntarily put themselves in a cage.
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They are working close with The Mane Six so that once they defeat Grogar, they can take down the heroes out of nowhere, giving their enemies an even greater punch of revenge from the trio.
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just if you look strategically. Then no one knew that the trio created an alliance. Moreover, everyone thought that the two villains were in tartar. These two facts were trump cards that no one expected to see on the gaming table. And having opened in my opinion, the trio lost these trump cards.
I love this story, granny!
This is great so far
The characterization of Tirek and Chrysalis as being so supportive is a little weird (if cute).
Other than that you've got quite the fun interesting story here. I'm looking forward to seeing more.