Fluttershy will be trying to find the 8 pages with Doctor whooves, Derpy and Angel
( also check out luigi117's slendermane story. It has more detail.)
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Ooh, a Slendermane fic! Dis gun be gud!
*starts to read*
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Well, maybe it isn't that bad the whole way through..?
*reads the rest*
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That is all.
constructive criticism: fluttershy is WAYYY ooc,
compliments: thank you for making a slendermane fic, not enough people do that
cook breakfast for Angel bunny. She got a bowl and cut a couple of carrots, she cut them thin just how he liked them. After cutting the carrots she got lettuce and she started cutting that. She made it perfectly and placed it on the ground softly. "Angel bunny it's time to eat!" She stayed their for a minute, he didn't come over. "Angel! Where are you! Come here!" She looked under the couch, she also looked in his bed and all over the house. She went outside, She looked in the coop, calling for Angel. "ANGEL ARE YOU HUNGRY!? WHERE ARE YOU!" She noticed that she was yelling. All of the animals were hiding, she was thinking what could of happened to Angel. She cried thinking that he got stolen.////Fluttershy looked at Derpy and she had a big make on her right side of her body. Derpy finally Derpy slowed down and fell over. Doctor and fluttershy ran back fast to get her before Slendermane did. The Doctor pick up derpy as she fell asleep They saw a page, but did not notice it. Fluttershy saw a tall pony with a mask and a tux. She screamed and they ran off the trail. Derpy woke up on the Doctors back and got off and started to run soon as she woke up. Derpy saw slendermane and stop look at him the doctor grabbed Derpy before Slendermane got her. There found a truck and got in it but did not work they got out fast. Fluttershy said to the doctor " I hope my animals are ok" as she frowned. Angel bunny saw a leaf and thought about food from Fluttershy's garden. Fluttershy thought about all of her pets if they would be ok. The doctor saw a page and ran past it and missed trying to get it.~~~dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Queen_Chrysalis.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_bronymaster1.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_YouDontSay2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
The end seems a bit rushed.
The last sentence doesn't even make sense.
sorry I'm younger than you all, I think.....
i fixed the last sentience for you.
1379843 nope im 9 years old litteraly 9 years old and a mild language using almost near kinda fat levels
SHIT IM GONNA BE FAT IN DA FUTER AND IM STILL 9 YEARS OLD