Slendermane and The 8 pages

by slenderthepony500

The Beginning

It was early one morning. Fluttershy yawned, and looked out her window, the sun was rising. She got up slowly and she combed her hair, she brushed it until it look nice. After she brushed her hair she went to the bathroom to clean her teeth, she scrubbed them until they were bright white. She walked down the stairs to cook breakfast for Angel bunny. She got a bowl and cut a couple of carrots, she cut them thin just how he liked them. After cutting the carrots she got lettuce and she started cutting that. She made it perfectly and placed it on the ground softly. "Angel bunny it's time to eat!" She stayed their for a minute, he didn't come over. "Angel! Where are you! Come here!" She looked under the couch, she also looked in his bed and all over the house. She went outside, She looked in the coop, calling for Angel. "ANGEL ARE YOU HUNGRY!? WHERE ARE YOU!" She noticed that she was yelling. All of the animals were hiding, she was thinking what could of happened to Angel. She cried thinking that he got stolen.

She walked to her cottage with her head down. "Why does this have to happen to me...." She looked back and saw little footprints. "Angel I am coming! Wait!" She looked where the path went. "No! I'm not going in the Everfree Forest!!" She ran back and sat in her garden. "I am NEVER going in there, but if I did I could get Angel!" She walked back and forth. "I'm going." She ran in the cottage and got food, water and tools. She got a flashlight just in case. It was getting to be midday and Fluttershy started to walk out the door. She breathed in and out. " Here I go... my little animals just eat anything from my garden." All the animals ran to the garden. She started to follow the path step by step. As she got closer it got darker and darker.

The first tree was right in front of her, she gulped. " Oh... my.... I'm here! She yawned. "This air is making me sleepy." She pulled leaves off the trees and picked up twigs off the ground She Started building a mini fort. "This is going to be a fail of a fort, but it will work for me." She finished the frame of the fort and put leaves on top of it. "Time to take a rest for a LITTLE while." She said to herself, " What do I do! I might get eating if I rest!" So she just lay down and screamed in her head. In the middle of the night she heard a stick crack, she stopped breathing so whatever was there, couldn't hear. She thought about Angel Bunny and she freaked out and ran to the thing and and jumped on to it. "Angel Bunny!? What are you doing?" Angel was crying in fear. He looked like he was telling her something. Something was wrong, "What are you telling me Angel!? Tell me please!" Angel pointed at this odd ripped up paper it said "NO" all over it. She picked it up and heard a rumble, she squeaked. "RUN!!"

As they were running they saw Doctor Whooves and Derpy, they were going to Zecora but they saw the paper and inspected the paper. Then Fluttershy and Angel bunny saw Derpy and Doctor whooves looking at an other paper. They stopped and ran to them. They screamed and told about what happened to Angel and the paper. He said this picture is very strange, it looks to me that it is written by a pony that just wants to scare us. They took the paper and went back looking for others just in case someone else will get scared. The sun was setting in the distance. It was dark in the forest they used the flashlight. They walked down the trail and heard a loud bang and Fluttershy got in the middle of everybody.

They saw two ways on the trail they went right and found a page "it is our 3rd page" Doctor Whooves said. There flashlight's battery was getting dimmer. they saw a tall pony and he was wearing a mask and a tuxedo. They screamed and ran back to the two way pah and they turned right. Derpy hit a tree and cut herself derpy fell in to fluttershy and toppled over Doctor Whooves they fell in to a rock and Derpy got back up and helped fluttershy and Doctor Whooves. They did not hear the bang anymore. They walked to a strange old bathroom the walk past it because the heard the bang starting to get louder. But it stop after just a minute Fluttershy started to get really scared angel still look shocked. As the Doctor saw a odd looking tree. he did not look back at it.

Fluttershy looked at Derpy and she had a big make on her right side of her body. Derpy finally Derpy slowed down and fell over. Doctor and fluttershy ran back fast to get her before Slendermane did. The Doctor pick up derpy as she fell asleep They saw a page, but did not notice it. Fluttershy saw a tall pony with a mask and a tux. She screamed and they ran off the trail. Derpy woke up on the Doctors back and got off and started to run soon as she woke up. Derpy saw slendermane and stop look at him the doctor grabbed Derpy before Slendermane got her. There found a truck and got in it but did not work they got out fast. Fluttershy said to the doctor " I hope my animals are ok" as she frowned. Angel bunny saw a leaf and thought about food from Fluttershy's garden. Fluttershy thought about all of her pets if they would be ok. The doctor saw a page, but ran past it, missed trying to get the page.

Comments

[sirgawain1997]

[HyperRandomness]

Ooh, a Slendermane fic! Dis gun be gud!

*starts to read*

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Well, maybe it isn't that bad the whole way through..?

*reads the rest*

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That is all.

[Night Sky]

constructive criticism: fluttershy is WAYYY ooc,
compliments: thank you for making a slendermane fic, not enough people do that

[PlaguePaladin]

cook breakfast for Angel bunny. She got a bowl and cut a couple of carrots, she cut them thin just how he liked them. After cutting the carrots she got lettuce and she started cutting that. She made it perfectly and placed it on the ground softly. "Angel bunny it's time to eat!" She stayed their for a minute, he didn't come over. "Angel! Where are you! Come here!" She looked under the couch, she also looked in his bed and all over the house. She went outside, She looked in the coop, calling for Angel. "ANGEL ARE YOU HUNGRY!? WHERE ARE YOU!" She noticed that she was yelling. All of the animals were hiding, she was thinking what could of happened to Angel. She cried thinking that he got stolen.////Fluttershy looked at Derpy and she had a big make on her right side of her body. Derpy finally Derpy slowed down and fell over. Doctor and fluttershy ran back fast to get her before Slendermane did. The Doctor pick up derpy as she fell asleep They saw a page, but did not notice it. Fluttershy saw a tall pony with a mask and a tux. She screamed and they ran off the trail. Derpy woke up on the Doctors back and got off and started to run soon as she woke up. Derpy saw slendermane and stop look at him the doctor grabbed Derpy before Slendermane got her. There found a truck and got in it but did not work they got out fast. Fluttershy said to the doctor " I hope my animals are ok" as she frowned. Angel bunny saw a leaf and thought about food from Fluttershy's garden. Fluttershy thought about all of her pets if they would be ok. The doctor saw a page and ran past it and missed trying to get it.~~~dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_future.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Queen_Chrysalis.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_bronymaster1.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_YouDontSay2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png

[PandaBewbs]

The end seems a bit rushed. The last sentence doesn't even make sense.

[slenderthepony500]

sorry I'm younger than you all, I think.....

[slenderthepony500]

i fixed the last sentience for you.

[PlaguePaladin]

1379843 nope im 9 years old litteraly 9 years old and a mild language using almost near kinda fat levels
SHIT IM GONNA BE FAT IN DA FUTER AND IM STILL 9 YEARS OLD