Twilight is talking a stroll through the Everfree Forest. She is going to Zecora's hut to have some of her favorite tea. It is all good until she finds an odd looking page hanging from a tree...
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Scary.
But AWESOME
Just a quick question, but why are the first few paragraphs over-indented and some not indented at all? Just pointing that out. Good story by the way.
1356873 I have no idea.. I noticed that as well. Glad you like the story!
it begins...
*pumps shotgun*
1356976 Like a boss!
Good story, but the chapters are too short. Also, fourth. I've always wanted to be under 10th.
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1356998 Usually, my chapters in my stories are 1,000 words. It is a guideline I use. (With one story exception.)
Not bad. Creepy but not bad. I'd recommend longer chapters though. I try to put at least 2k words or more into my chapters in my story. Got over 400k words total so far and still going. You should check it out
Dude, it's Slendermare. Slendermare is a better name, it fits the pony style better, and it sounds better. WHY DOESN'T ANYBODY USE SLENDERMARE?
Okay, I feel bad about bugging you about this, so bookmarking, even though Dark fics make me sad.
1357306 Well, mare would imply that SlenderMAN is a girl.. I actually think it does make more sense for it to be Slendermane.
Slenderman is a guy. Slendermare is a girl.
Or they're both genderless, of course, and the name for the creature just uses the gender generally assumed by the society.
It looks great, but since the Doctor is magically there, does that mean Slendermane was brought from one of his recent adventures?
It would be even better if you indented every time a new character speaks.
Well this is only creepy..
Time to giggle at the ghostie?
1357441 Nope. Time to F.E.A.R. (Fuck Everything And Run)
(finishes chapter) so it begins (pumps 12 guage shotgun, puts a mag into my M16 Assualt Rifle, pullsback the slide on M1911 .45 CAL pistol and puts a box mag into M249 SAW Machine Gun) I'm ready for you now slendermare
1358111 OMG.... How many guns do you have?
>> Bookworm yeah I know but that's not going to stop me from tryin
>> Luigi117 enough to kick slendermares ass
AWESOME!!!!!!! Finally someone does this!!!!
what happenes next tells me!!!!!!! 
more!!!!!
...I do not envy the poor soul trapped with the Slenderman