• Published 17th Apr 2023
  • 633 Views, 39 Comments

Striding Outlander: Book 1 - Star Shimmering



Betrayed by Samuel Hayden, The Slayer was sent away and finds himself in a odd world called Equestria. Finding himself drawn into the lives of the ponies of Equestria he’s faced with two options. Stop Hell’s destruction, or find peace within himself.

Comments ( 29 )

I didn't know this was taken down again.
Will we see what happens next?

Wonder how Spike feels about Zyrek?
And how he feel about what Doom Slayer did to those dragons?

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Hopefully (If God wills), if my heart is still in it, I’ll do my best to complete it. All one could ask is patience.

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They were gonna eat Fluttershy. So, they had it coming when the Doom Slayer slaughters them.

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Was still wondering since Spike himself is a dragon

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Wait why was it taken down the first time?

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Doom Slayer got his own dragon "friend" with the white female dragon. Soo?

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You didn't know this, but this was taken down multiple times actually. Trust me, I been with this Doom 2016 story ( Along with a different version that sets in Doom Eternal ) this whole time. And I'm sadly starting to get very agitated that this great potential of the story isn't gonna be continuing for a long time.

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I am just wondering


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I think I lost count on how many times it happened.
I just wished we saw what happened next

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Dang well I do hope he/she continues with it and if he or she the author needs some help with brainstorming or editing then I’m happy to help.

“You know, I bet you'd be a lot shorter than me without all that seaweed you call a mane.”

Shots fired, shots fired.

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Still I’m joust wondering why the author took it down?
Plus if the author needs help editing the next chapter of this story then I’m here to help.

Seriously I need more of this story.

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I’ve already have the chapters in the work and know where I want this story to go next so none of that is necessary.

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Good for you. But, if you know where you want the story to go, why do you keep deleting and putting it back constantly? :duck:

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Writers block, and my heart just not into it.

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Hmm. Guess it seems you back into the fray to continuing this. Good luck to finally complete this. :eeyup:

Great story, lots of potential, keep up the great work! Oh and take as long as you need. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Agreed and hey we’re always here to encourage you and help out if you need it. Don’t be afraid to ask.

Oooo! Doomy went to town and crushed his enemies~ Nice!

Oh man. I can’t wait for more! Very excited to see what happens next!

Have a great day!!!!!

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!!! HAhahah I'm finally that guy!! Sweet!

But serious answer. I have a lot of different tastes in fics so I get around

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:trixieshiftleft: oh well
Glad you don't appear in literally every fic I read you just appear in lime 70% of em

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I now have a mission XD

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Then you have to read like half of the stories in blinkiverse. Read "Not the First" I promise it won't make you physically gag in real life and change your entire perception of Teleporting and anything Twilight related (lie:pinkiecrazy:) and you have to read the numerous TF2 crossovers and then you have to read pastel paradise(bros before hoes:eeyup:) and alot others

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Hahaha sounds like fun

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I'll wait for any notifications :pinkiehappy:

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Hahahahah! I'll get to it one of these days lol

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Then he know.. Kindness was never a choice for him anymore

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