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“In only just a few moments, four bakers will enter a fight for cupcake supremacy! And one by they’ll be eliminated as they’re judged on taste, presentation, and in the final round the last two bakers standing would give all to bring it all together in a fantasy cupcake display.

The winner would have the honor to cater at the VIP room at the world famous Cloudsdale Festival, and would walk home with ten thousand bits!! Hello, I am Pinkie Pie and this is… CUPCAKE WARS!!”

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Fun read keep it up.

This is awesome make some more like this

This was a decent story. You had a good premise, and the execution was good, albeit a bit predictable. You had some good jokes in there, but I feel like there needed to be a bit more funny for this to really stand out as a comedy. Aside from that, this really needed some additional proofreading, as there were a significant amount of mechanical errors throughout.

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