Of Fox tails and space trails

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schorpioen007

schorpioen007 #1 · Apr 3rd, 2023 · 2 · ·

Good story ^^

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #2 · Apr 7th, 2023 · · ·

Unfortunately, I'll have to disqualify this one from the contest. Shutterbug could maybe be passed off as Chrysalis in disguise, since "Shutterbug" is the fanon name of her pony disguise when she was taking pictures of the mane six. Or maybe you could point to one of the countless changelings on screen in A Canterlot Wedding and say that one of them was Shutterbug, pre-reform. But there's no way around Molten being an OC, and original characters aren't supposed to be allowed in this contest, sorry.

Here are the notes I had up to the point where I realized it would for sure have to be disqualified:
- Beginning with Krystal so injured is a unique take on it. Wow ... I didn't expect her to be missing a whole leg!
- Changedling This changeling has an extra 'D' in him ... and not in the way you'd usually expect in a clopfic! (Also, weirdly capitalized when you didn't capitalize the word in the rest of your fic.)
- She bounces lightly Randomly changing to present tense.
- Sunlike unlike other planets was an untainted Sunlike?
- The creatures that lived here were even more expensive than what she could even imagine. If you get them from the Hasbro toy catalogue, I guess...

Thank you for trying, though!

Armored_Shadow