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SamSwordsman123


30 year old man from California who likes to fight with swords. Author of Successor, Love Mark, and Daybreaker at Canterlot Wedding Verses.

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This story is a sequel to The Sheriff and the Princess: Together?


Pipp and Hitch were accused of being a couple after Sparky made a video of Hitch caring for Pipp while she was sick. Now they realize they have feelings for each other and start dating. Their friends also begin dating other ponies, as Zipp is required by her mother to pick a suitor and produce a royal heir. Meanwhile, Misty continues her efforts to get Sparky for Opaline and get her Cutie Mark, but is her destiny really to serve to the evil Alicorn Queen? Find out.

Main Story in the Love Mark Verse.

Couples Include: Hitch x Pipp, Zipp x Thunder, Izzy x Rufus, and Sunny x Fireforge Destiny (OC).

Featured 3/28/23!

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 350 )

Sunny x… to be decided. OC? Misty? Constructive Comments Please! Those help me improve.

I guess I can't think of anything else and I was looking for any male characters that's not that many I can still think of sprout but I think you have another plan for him so I guess go for OC character

Misty x Sprout could work? Sunny… Not sure since there are a few guys but I just don’t see it… Maybe a Male OC could be like a Son of Twilight or someone that is involved in ancient Equestria.

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Actually that's I like the idea of those shippings of Misty and sprout because I seen artworks of that and I thought this would make him change his mind of views of unicorns and Pegasus and probably help Misty to have somebody who actually cares about her and probably get away from that crazy Alicorn Opaline and yeah sunny I could not find anybody I was thinking of Rocky but too many shippings of him and jazz so that's out of the question so I was thinking of an OC character as well although I do like the idea of somebody who's related to Twilight

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Haven’t seen any art between the two but I do like the idea. Sunny I don’t really know

“Let me guess… Rufus? Or as he likes to call himself… Hoofdini?” Pipp asked managing a smile.

Yeah I know the magician who can rival the great and powerful Trixie:trixieshiftleft:

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Possibly. I don't know. Son of Twilight huh? That could work. I did have an idea for the OC being a male alicorn that Opaline kept prisoner in her place or something.

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Maybe she has him wear an armor that she is able to control him… or go Darth Vader route with him actually been the one to betray Twilight?

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Well I saw of Misty and Sprout on deviantART or Twitter and I thought it was a pretty cute idea

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Ohhhh now that is certainly a twist that there is another Pony aside from Misty as prisoner very interesting I would say

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Well only time will tell. I will eventually blog for opinions and maybe make a sketch as well.

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Here's probably another idea and I seen a couple of stories and artwork of this about Queen Haven having relationship with Alphabittle even in the show and the movie they've been talking with each other and everything and I thought yeah that's actually a pretty interesting one as well so there you go that's another one there if not whatever

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What if Misty is aware of the pony but is totally afraid of him? Like Darth Vader fear

“When I first saw you, I guess you could say I was really blown away by you,” Hitch said. “It was during that show just before we all got together and decided to bring back magic. I saw you flying and singing and you had such a lovely voice.”

Ok so far this is a pretty good start of your story here so it looks like pipp was still thinking about that incident when she got sick and how the video got viral and everybody thinks they were together but now she's starting to think that she is in love with him then Izzy apparently got a crush on Rufus which is cute but she wanted to ask zipp about her opinion about how hitches doing and how he thinks about it and apparently he's also been thinking as well and speaking of hitch he showed up with Sparky then she wanted to speak with him privately once they were alone they say a lot of things about each other and how they felt even the first time they met each other so it looks like they want to make this relationship work and they really do like each other once again this is a pretty good start I wonder what else could happen guess we'll find out next time

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Well I had thought of him with Posey.

Maybe instead of Darth Vader it would be Kylo Ren like…

Finally! I wasn't the only one who thought of Izzy and Rufus as a couple!

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Yeah I felt like they had chemistry based on their interactions.

I think Sunny could be shipped with Dahlia. I'm just saying.

Izzy and Rufus, not a pairing I would think of. Interested to see how that will play out.

Very cute. Can't wait for chapter two.

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Thanks, I don't know when I'll have it ready. I was already working on four other stories, I rotate 2 every week. So I'll just have to do this one when I can until I get the next one done which take some time.

I love this, it's so cute! I ship Hitch x Pipp and I ship Sunny x Izzy

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Yeah I guess I like the idea of those two as well but I'm gonna be going all straight here.

This a very good new chapter. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

“Hey Pipsqueaks! I’ve got some exciting news for you! You know how you all thought that Hitch and I were a couple a little while ago? Well, I actually started thinking and realized that my feelings for Hitch were a bit more then mere friendship! So tonight, we are going on a date to-

Wow what a way to drop the bomb pipp lol 😆

Potalian Cuisine, it was one of the top-rated places for dinner here in Maretime Bay, serving spaghetti, pizza, and other fine foods for ponies

I love spaghetti that's one of my favorite food of all time 😋

Alright, I definitely like the “son of Opaline” much better then from Twilight and Flurry. I wonder if Misty sees both Opaline as a mother and this son as her older brother but either is rejected or fear to say it?

If I had to guess he might be Opaline’s last resort if Misty fails for her mission… it would be cool if you brought Sprout into this story like a redemption story for him and have Misty be sent to court him while trying to get Sparky.

As for the son’s name… Fire name makes sense maybe like “Dark Fire” “Burst Flame” “Combustion” “Darth Flame” “Solar Flare” are ones I can think of? This idea kind of reminds me of Lion King 2 story if you ever seen that film decades ago.

“I wonder what sort of trouble he’ll (into with) her?” Pipp asked. “I know she won’t want him taking any pictures or videos, she hates those.”

This doesn’t sound correct try like “he’ll cause for her” or “what sort of trouble he will cause for her”

“You’re just fillies,” Pipp said. “Don’t worry, I could take you girls out there sometime.”

Awww that's pretty generous of her to do that just like Rarity would do

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Forgot to say this… So Izzy was teasing Zipp about Rocky. What you think of that?

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Yeah well she does seem to be newest Rarity being beautiful and generous. Izzy is Pinkie, Sunny is Twilight, Hitch is a combo of Fluttershy and Applejack, Zipp is Rainbow Dash and Misty is Starlight Glimmer.

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As I said I'm disregarding all TYT episodes that came after A Day In the Life for this fanfic.

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Oh yea forgot what you wrote on the note. Focused to much on the story :twilightblush:

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Whoops forgot to put the word get in there. All the trouble he'll get in with her.

“I guess not,” Hitch said before reaching into the pocket of his sash and pulling out a book. “Let’s see… things to do on a first date. Ask your date questions to get to know them like what they like to do in their free time. So Pipp what do you like to do in your free time?”

Awww hitch is so nervous that he needed a guidebook how dates supposed to go

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And he is a sticker to the rules so I felt it would be in character for him to do that.

“Sometimes I wish I had a brother or sister,” Hitch said. “My parents met an accident when I was a colt though. I grew up mostly in a foster foal home here for the most part. My grandmare could have taken me in but she lived in the middle of nowhere on the edge of Maretime Bay, she thought it would be better if I stayed here where I could interact with more ponies my age. I’d visit her every chance I got. The closest thing I had to siblings were Sunny and… Sprout.”

I guess that's also another theory about what happened to hitches parents since we didn't see them either in the flashback or any pictures of them same with Izzy but at least we got the chance to see Sunny's father Argyle and what kind of pony he is before his passing and I guess the Pega sisters were the lucky ones that they have their mother but it is kind of sad to think about it

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Yeah, I just had to make my own little headcanon on the spot for their families since Queen Haven is the only parent shown to still be around for the Mane 5.

Pipp recounted the story. “Even though he was king of Zephyr Heights he still retained his position as leader of the guard. He oversaw the protection of the city. But one day, he went out by himself and was stabbed in the back by a criminal whose gang he had locked up.”

That news caused Hitch’s mouth to fall open.

“The guard found him after several days of searching,” Pipp continued. “ My mother had him hanged.”

Whoa dang that gotten dark really quickly and sad at the same time

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Yeah I thought it would make an unexpected shocking backstory on what happened to her and Zipp's father.

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Yes I guess you're right even I didn't see that coming

Awww well this was a pretty nice chapter so pipp made an announcement that both her and hitch are a couple and they are preparing to go out for their first date going to a restaurant which that's pretty cool and it's one of those basic first date type of thing it was nice of them to express how much they do care for each other and even told they're sort of their backstories about their life and a very unexpected too but at least they're open up to each other but I think their first date turned out pretty well but little did they know Misty is spying on them and it looks like Opaline has another plan to get Sparky I wonder what could that be I guess we'll find out next time

I thought an Alicorn Prince or Knight from ancient Equestria. Some have suggested the son of Twilight Sparkle (or as I like to think of her the G5 version of Twilight), or the son of Flurry Heart (I’m gonna say things went mostly the same in this AU from FIM except for at least The Last Problem because of Twilight not assuming the form we saw in that final episode), but I think the idea I like the most for the OC would be Opaline’s own son. Haven’t got a name for him yet, Vengeful Fire? Fireforge Destiny?

Hmm I guess that makes an idea to be Opaline’s kid and trying to be Rebellion against his own mother after what she's trying to do and all the lies she told about Twilight and her friends and I wonder where he be like in prison or something and nobody doesn't even notice he even exists not even Misty knows about it but again that would be an interesting one

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Coincidentally I'm going on a date myself today right after work. Going to the movies and then dinner.

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Using this experience to write this story? Good idea :twilightblush:

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Oh that's nice I hope you guys have fun and I wonder if you guys are going to watch that new movie The Super Mario Bros but if not that's fine because I'm sure you guys well enjoy yourself

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