Queen Haven has received a tip-off from an unknown source about strange goings-on on the subway system that runs beneath Zephyr Heights. Disguising herself as a normal citizen, she heads down to investigate. Little does she realise, this investigation will take her on a horrifying journey into the unknown, one that threatens to be the end of the line, so to speak...
Loosely based on the now-defunct theme park attraction Derren Brown's Ghost Train, an ambitious but ultimately flawed attempt to reinvent the ghost train.
Chapters (2)
God... that was one horrific story.
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Horrific as in terribly written or horrific as in scary?
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Scary.
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Ah. Well, it seems this was rather scarier than the ride was. I can post a ride video here if you'd like; no recordings contain the VR sequences for obvious reasons, but the live action elements are well documented.
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I guess it wouldn't hurt
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Not bad at all!
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Thanks. I fancied shifting up my repertoir a bit.
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That was quite ingenius.
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That recording shows a rare occasion when all the effects worked as intended.
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Aye.
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Which made for a spooky experience.
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I bet.
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Sadly, the last time I rode the VR was constantly sticking.
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That's rather inconvenient.
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If anything, the audio and video being out of sync made proceedings creepier.
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That's understandable.
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Almost as if the Demon was messing with the visuals.
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Exactly.
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Hmmm. There's more mileage in this than I thought.
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There definitely is.
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Possibly a sequwl?
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I don't see why not. Maybe someone else could experience it. Like how you had those stories with the Crusaders and Cheerilee having those unique dreams.
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I remember that now. Nemesis at Alton Towers would also make a good story.
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Sure.
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That'll be next then.