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There's a story.
It's about an Earth pony meeting a Unicorn. About travelling to far off lands. About befriending the Pegasi. About bringing back magic to a dying world. About a pony who became so much more then they ever dreamed.
This is his story.
This is his end.
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One of my favorite parts of this has to be the shift to Star Fall's perspective. I love seeing other povs in a story and the subtle mention of her dead parents and her unfortunate death added to my enjoyment of this story.
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Thanks :)
I considered egging it on a bit with the "dead parents" shtick, but found it all became a bit too obvious. Better to leave it reasonably subtle.
This is fantastic. Like wow. Thank you for posting this story here.
I even had this playing for the ending of it too.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qU1q7uOFXUI
Well, glad I happened to see you mention this in Estee's Discord. :)
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Huzzah, the system works! Lol
My path of destiny, which led me to this fic, too was narrowed because of Estee's Discord
Sorry, I had to be a bit verbose.
Well, what to say?
I appreciated the feeling of encroaching doom, but somehow I realized what you were going for it, only after reread 😒
But that might be only me, and the fact that it is 2 a.m. over here
In other words, pretty nice! Though in a new, changed destiny 'timeline', Argyle might be nabbed now by cosmic police. You know the ones: they are looking after discrepancies and such.
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I've been tempted to revisit this Argyle, but I question whether it will devalue his sacrifice.
There was originally a 'post credits' scene of sorts. With permission, Fan Of Most Everything's God-Shimmer would have reacted to a horrific cosmic shriek. A tree of harmony not dying, but being reconfigured into a new form. She'd of been baffled, but unable to interfere thanks to her power limitations. As she left, a crystal leaf with this realities 'Mane 5' etched on it would have floated into her hand. The only remnant of an erased world. Despite not knowing why exactly, she'd keep it, understanding that somehow it was important, had meaning.