Swiftly Rising

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PirateLord93

PirateLord93 #1 · Mar 6th, 2023 · 1 · · Prologue II - Another Recruit Arrives In Canterlot ·

Liking it so far.

PirateLord93

PirateLord93 #2 · May 19th, 2023 · · · Entry 1 - The Process ·

I have concerns about Pete, his cutie mark alone is raising red flags.

`Wh-t is se-- thro--h one le-s ma- -ot be se-n as the sa-- thr--gh an---er per-pect---. Be ca--ful who -ou tru--, beca--e it cou-- be -he dif--re--- be--een li-e -r de--h. Sta- stro-g, you-- on-.`

It took me a good minute, but I figured it out. "What is seen through one lens may not be seen as the same through another perspective. Be careful who you trust, because it could be the difference between life or death. Stay strong, young one."

PirateLord93

PirateLord93 #3 · May 19th, 2023 · · · Visions ·

“However, you first responded to the ‘minor’ threat in the second major event. You focused more on saving your fellow guardspony first, NOT entering the throne room. Who were you supposed to protect?” the stallion responded, lowering the clipboard and looking at me sternly.

I figured he would lose points for that. The Royal Guards job is to protect the Princesses, so the Princesses always take top priority.

HarpyYoshi

HarpyYoshi #4 · May 20th, 2023 · · · Visions ·

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Good luck figuring out the rest of them...
And as for Pete's cutie mark...yea, it's jarring as a description too. His character overall is shrouded in mystery.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #5 · Jun 21st, 2023 · · · Our Last Day Here ·

Is it a prequel or a sequel? Who knows, because I'm not telling you. That's for you to figure outWhy do you want to do that?

HarpyYoshi

HarpyYoshi #6 · Jun 21st, 2023 · · · Our Last Day Here ·

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Because I'm not telling you. That's for you to figure out.

Admittedly, I should take that bit out. Because that's a huge spoiler itself as to my plans with this book.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #7 · Sep 7th, 2023 · · · Entry 3 - Operation: Discovery |3| (NSFW) ·

Graphic content ahead will be denoted with a NSFW tag on the chapter. Proceed with caution!

Could you please go into more detail? I’m sorry, but a Gore, Violence, Death and Profanity doesn’t do enough for me as a warning.

HarpyYoshi

HarpyYoshi #8 · Sep 7th, 2023 · · · Entry 3 - Operation: Discovery |3| (NSFW) ·

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Just in case.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #9 · Nov 30th, 2023 · 1 · · Entry 5 - New News ·

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Then you should take it out, not just because of spoilers but because it will make people think there’s a story they need to read first if they want to understand this one.

Chrysaorix