This story is a sequel to The Blue Mage
When Apple Bloom, Daring Do, and Trixie discovered an alicorn prison dating back to the time of the alicorn purge, they were shocked to find it held two seemingly innocent alicorn fillies. Leaving them with Twilight, Spike revealed that they weren’t just any alicorn fillies; they were the daughters of the most dangerous alicorn to ever live. Now they must find their way in a world far different from the one they knew.
Meanwhile Twilight, with the help of Daring Do, begins checking on the remaining alicorn prisons that are hidden throughout the land, both within Equestria and beyond.
This story follows directly after The Blue Mage, and has a lot to do with the Alicorn Imperium and the Alicorn Purge that was introduced in Child of Misery, so reading both will be necessary for this story.
if its okay to ask, are the previous stories required to be read zo understand your new story
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From the very first sentence I'd say yes, or there will be quite the confusion.
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Yes, I was thinking I should add a note to the description. This one directly follows The Blue Mage, and has a lot more to do with Child of Misery than Blue Mage did, so reading both is going to be necessary for this story.
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I've been eagerly waiting for this day!
That was a good first chapter goodluck with the rest of it.
That was a good chapter.
I'm glad this is being continued.
Finally! I'm all caught up.
So far I absolutely love your story
That was a good chapter.
That was a good chapter.
This is my favorite chapter so far. It was interesting to learn the Alicorn prisons.
Here are some highlights of mine:
So, Ruby Sky (especially) and Latent Flame, at the moment, seem to be the nicest of the Alicorns for now.
Under no circumstances should he be released.
Nobody's dead until you see the body.
Interesting, hopefully we'll learn more about her.
Uh-oh, that is not good.
So, not only is there an Alicorn prison underneath the Changeling hive, there is also a likely chance that Chrysalis herself knows about it?
Possible foreshadowing?
It's worth a try, if you ask me.
I have a bad feeling that something is going to break them out. On the bright side, Achlys is already been permanently dealt with. Hopefully....
Loving this story so far! Keep it up!
Is this the last story in this series?
That was a good chapter. I wonder how many more of these ancient Alicorns were considered evil by association instead of actual misdeeds.
I just read through the previous stories in this series and was thrilled to see this story was still ongoing! I enjoy this very much, I'll be following with interest.
Why does the text go from left sided to centred halfway through?
This was a nice chapter. I look forward to how their meeting with Celestia and Luna will go.
Also, I don't know if it was intentional; but the text went from left sided to centered halfway through the chapter.
Nice chapter and growth! You did not close the center justify code though after the separator halfway through.
That was a good chapter.
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lol, woops. Yep, I missed the / in the code to end the centering. It's fixed now.
Hum I feel like it's a little cruel since you got rid of there mother but brought them into the world I hope something can be done for them. Or they may just turn evil too and have to be put down.
Hahahahahahaha
This will be fun
I wonder if starlight is a half alicorn
That was a good chapter. I wonder if Starlight has any connection to this Alicorn.
I forgot, does the human world exist in this universe? If so, Twilight could use some inspiration from that world to help with her inventing the telephone.
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This series did start in the middle of season 4 which was after the first EQG movie, but before the rest, so for this series only the first movie would be canon. Which means Twilight wouldn't have any way to get to the human world or even contact them, so she'd have to just go off of what she remembers. Thinking on it. I don't think Twilight really had much experience with phones in that first movie. She used the computer in the library and that was about it for technology.
Yeah, Sunset was called to the school by Rainbow at the beginning of 'Rainbow Rocks' by cell, but they could have been early commercial cells after the fall formal ...
Rainbow and Daring are at Wisteria's prison correct?
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That was the one imprisoned in ghastly gorge. This is one of the other ones mentioned earlier.
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Oh you mean Ruby Sky & Latent Flame?
Replace will with shall. Its grammatically correct, but considering the dialect, it should be shall.
… well, that is interesting
That was a good chapter.
This is a crazy universe
That makes a lot of sense.
That was a good chapter goodluck with the next one.
Remove the a
I see. The whole reason you named this character Dawn was to make this one specific joke. You cannot fool me.
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Hmmm, including Twi's parents give the sequence - Sunset, Twilight, Night (Light), Twilight, Dawn
That was a good chapter.
You know, Granny Smith being a half alicorn earth pony would explain some stuff about her own age...
So is it just a coincidence that Harrow's prison collapsed part way through? Or did Harrow escape and do that on his way out? I can certainly understand them checking his prison first, assuming that they reasoned based on his crimes that he'd be the worst of them to wind up escaping.
I know it doesn't add up to even close to the exact difference, but I wonder the temporal anomaly with the portal is at least in part a consequence of Apple Bloom repeatedly rewinding time?
How is everything?
No Sci-Twi? How unfortunate, I would have thought she might want to study her world's magical fields and help humanity understand it better. But that world isn't the focus of this story. Maybe there will be a spin-off one day. *shrugs* Eh, I can dream.
Update?
She wasn't much better when 'Forgotten Friendship' aired either ...
That was a good chapter goodluck with the next one.
I was just thinking, "When is this story going to update?". And it did!