Twilight and Spike: Dark Wings

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Twilight is in training to become a super-pony, a hero of the night. And wants Spike to join her.

This was a writing prompt for "Not safe for work", "clop", and "Secret Spot". This story satisfies all of these. G/Tv-Y7 rated.

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Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #1 · Jan 5th, 2023 · 2 · ·

... Have your damned fav anyway.

Stahlseele

Stahlseele #2 · Jan 5th, 2023 · 2 · ·

Luna would probably be Dark Warrior.
Spike:"Luna. I can't move."

Scyphi

Scyphi #3 · Jan 5th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Just don't forget the milk!

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #4 · Jan 6th, 2023 · · ·

This was a writing prompt for "Not safe for work", "clop", and "Secret Spot". This story satisfies all of these. G/Tv-Y7 rated.

How?

keybounce

keybounce #5 · Jan 6th, 2023 · · ·

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Oh yes! I love that scene.

So how does Gosalin manage to speed the events up and do it faster?

keybounce

keybounce #6 · Jan 6th, 2023 · · ·

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The dangerous place is not safe for work.
The clopping of the hooves on the vertical ascent.
And a secret danger room training spot.

Scyphi

Scyphi #7 · Jan 6th, 2023 · · ·

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In fairness, it was never explicitly stated that she did it faster than Darkwing, just that her time was much better than Darkwing would've expected of her, particularly for a first try.

As for how...well...I suppose the same way Darkwing manages to best his own times with the thing, despite the whole set-up seeming to be preset and preprogrammed to work in a seemingly very precisely timed and predetermined manner, all on automatic once started, like a Rube Goldberg machine. Unless it's all controlled by, like, concealed secret triggers or something that are somehow only tripped when a specific action is done, regardless of point of time in the routine (meaning you should be able to theoretically skip or do out of order certain events, which probably explains how you can be allowed to complete the course AND still forget the all-important milk)...but I'm not sure how that'd work. Honestly, as amusing and iconic as the scene is, I never really understood how the timing mechanism for it was supposed to work...but who's counting, right?

keybounce

keybounce #8 · Jan 6th, 2023 · · ·

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As much as I really enjoyed DWD, I am really upset that the "current revision" of him seems to be an egotistical jerk that just wants his series relaunched.

I mean, sure, he may very well have been egotistical, but he knew the job was dangerous when he took it :-).

(No super sauce required ... now that would make an interesting old character to do a short on.)

ThePinkedWonder

ThePinkedWonder #9 · Jan 7th, 2023 · 1 · ·

"We are the terrors, that flap in the night!
We are the defenders of all that is right!
We are Dark Wings tough!"

While I was thinking if they were doing to say that, it happened! That one especially was funny, but the story as a whole was amusing too.

Author's note: The writing prompts for this short were "Not safe for work", "clop", and "Secret Spot". This story satisfies all of these. G (Or Tv-Y7) rated.

Since you already had that word for word in the story's long description, you don't really need it an A/N too since nothing else was added to it. Doing it could be a nice safeguard if the story's long description was very long and you were worried readers might not read the whole description if the note was at the bottom, but since the long description only had 2 sentences, it's safe to say no one will skip it

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