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I don't think she understands how screwed she is.
Okay doesn't believe that he's gone trying to show her greatest fear God knows you're here to see her and knows all the darkest little secrets that you hide
Shouldn't he get an OC tag, then?
At least it's pony Jesus not pony grim reaper who's going rogue because he's tired on the rainbow factory killing ponies and changing the destiny on the ones who died and that's a lot of paperwork. So he has to fix the problem himself by killing everyone in the factory or even leave some survivors to make the legend go by for a warning
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Yeah, she is screwed. You can't hide from God. No thought or action goes unseen by His eyes. She shall be judged, as they all will be.
To be fair if you step back and look at it from a completely practical and nonbiased perspective like Doctor Hyde did when he originally explained it is then it does make sense, Magic would have ceased to be if the factory doesn't do it's job. Now his talk of racial cleansing and all that is wrong but the problem is that the inspector is judging them on their moral standing. I think if this story has the Inspector shutting down the factory it would be interesting to have some sort of epilogue where years later the world, or at least the ponies, are dead because the factory was shut down proving that while the system was corrupt the underlying problem was fixed enough to allow society to survive.
You respond to comments by moving your mouse over to the right-hand corner of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
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It really isn't that bad. I'm surprised so many people are triggered by this story...
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Rainbow Dash is a level of stupid that should be illegal across the multiverse. Granted, the entire Rainbow Factory concept is a level of retard idea that still makes my head spin as to why anyone ever thought it was a good idea.
So of course Crash wouldn't know how screwed she is.