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daOtterGuy


Open for Art Commissions. I write gay romantic comedies with ponies now. Get off my back, MOM.

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Granny Smith can’t acknowledge the loss of her foals. Her grand foals help her move on.


Written as a gift for Novelle Tale in the Quillsmas gift exchange.

Preread by The Sleepless Beholder and LuckyChaosHooves

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 9 )

Poor Granny… thrust into the position of parent once again before she can finish — or even truly start — reeling from her son’s death. You capture that pain very well and I’m intrigued to see where this goes.

That was a good first chapter goodluck with the rest of it.

That was a good chapter.

Ooof, the way Granny is so casual about this routine…

This story does an excellent job hitting each of its big “OUCH” moments. Poor Bloom…

A very touching conclusion. Thank you very much for this story.

I hate how much this story made me feel things when I read it for Quillmas. I can't imagine how hard it would be spending the rest of your life knowing that the last words you spoke to someone you love were spoken in anger. I get Granny here. I get all the characters here. Everyone deals with grief in their own way, and you captured this beautifully.

Now I need to go read some comedy or another set of work documents. Congratulations and never do that to my feelings again.

That was a good story.

I cried. I won't lie. I loved this so much.

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