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Years after the events of Anon a Miss, a now adult Sunset is enjoying life with her husband Flash and her 3 year old daughter. But when the couple receives an invitation to the CHS class reunion, our fire headed girl wonders if she's emotionally ready to face not only the Rainbooms, the gang who nearly killed her, but Anon a Miss themselves.


Taking place in Dainn’s Anon a Miss universe

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Saying those three words is never easy but the weight it takes off you is worth it and forgiving those who betrayed you in the way that Sunset endured takes much time for those wounds to heal.

Putting aside the grammar, it's a relief Sunset Shimmer can be able to forgive the Rainbooms and the Crusaders after all those years from the bottom of her heart.

Merry Christmas to you, and I wish you a Happy New Year.

11459431
Thanks man, note to self try to improve my fanfic writing and grammar by next year:twilightblush: But i'm happy you enjoyed the story and a marry christmas and happy new year to you too:twilightsmile:

11459421
True especially since with how the original story ended, the author definitely made it seem like sunset wasn't willing to forgive everyone anytime soon.

11459421
True. Especially in this case where this is in same universe as the story where Sunset would have died because of Rainbow's desperate need to save her pride and desire to "teach Sunset a lesson", if Snips and Snails had not intervene.

It has a nice ending and was a good story.

now to my complaint....What the heck is with that GAINT PARAGRAH?! I could barely read any of it with out getting lost and confused, and almost gave up.
Heck skipped parts of it as was so confusing to read!

WWHHHHHHHHEEEWWW Needed to get that out, seriously break up giant paragraphs makes it easier to read and less confsing.

11459689
Sorry bout that😅 I figured that the longer paragraph sections would better explain the situation and the events more than just writing it as a short sentence explication.

11459738
It does, but there such a thing called Breaking up the paragraph, break up the entire thing into smaller ones or mild large ones,

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