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Immediately after her concert, Octavia is riddled with guilt after what she said to Vinyl on the phone so she rushes home to apologize only to find a horrifying and heartbreaking scene. Now practically an outcast in Ponyville Octavia wonders if she'll ever be forgiven for what she has done.

Based off the infamous animation https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZvGGGHekU4

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Honestly, this is one of those situations where you have to forgive yourself before caring about others forgiveness.

Wait.. What if Octavia commits suicide as well? I’m sure everyone will be full of guilt for not looking at Octavia.. *starts to get sad by thinking about it*

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You'll just have to wait and see good buddyđŸ˜‰ I should have the final page up by tomorrow:twilightsmile:

The times she spent with her best friends were the happiest moment's in her life. whenever she was down or under the weather vinyl was always there to cheer her up, whether it was with words or music. But now there was no one to cheer her up, vinyl was gone and she wasn't coming back things will never be the same again for this young mare. Her friends hated her, Vinyls friends, family, fans, would have been husband hate her, and even her own parents wouldn't talk to her. she wished so badly that she could reverse all this, that she could have been born a unicorn so that she could use the time travel spell and fix all this. But she knew this could never be fixed. She lost everything and there was no going back from it.

Honestly, I wouldn’t care about them.

We find Octavia sitting gloomily on the kitchen floor with a bottle of scotch and a glass in hand as well. Normally she wouldn't be caught dead drinking this stuff, but considering today's event's and the loss of her friend she felt this was the appropriate time to "try new thing's". She look's down to her phone after she deleted all her social media pages and blocked her number as to avoid hate messages from all of Vinyl's followers. She also looked down to the switchblade that she took out of Vinyl's room after she took out the scotch. To this day she still wonder's why in the world Vinyl would even have something like that in her possession even though the music world especially if its rock or techno can get dangerous at times.

Well, that’s sad.

She stared into the open blade of the knife showing her reflection of the depressed look's in her eye's. As she stared into the blade the many hurtful words that came from her mouth and the ponies at the funeral and from her text before blocking her number kept playing in her mind.

What text?

"That is true old friend" Twilight answered." But listen while they are upset at you, they know your sorry for what you've done they're just not ready to show it yet. Again nobody hates you Octavia and I guarantee, everybody will forgive you. It'll take time but I assure you everyone will forgive you. Take a look at me and my friends, TBH I got betrayed by them a few times when i first moved to ponyville but we always try our hardest to make amends and move past our problem's cause we cherish our friendship more than anything int he world. And I promise you, you will be forgiven Octavia but until then you have to learn to forgive yourself first"

A few times?

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1. What text?

*three of the messages I written after the switchblade part were a few text's that she received from her phone.

2. A few times?

* Her friends selfish demand's for Twilights tickets to the grand galloping gala

* The infamous Canterlot wedding incident

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Ohh. I thought most of those were actually said.

Does the ticket part count?

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Kind of, they were acting a bit stubborn when trying to get the other ticket from her.

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But, does that count as her being betrayed?

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Hmm yeah I guess your right, the ticket thing wasn't that much of a betrayal. There was that fallout scene in the movie that counted as betrayal and abandonment thought.

I just think that Twilight is too optimistic or too naive on the harsh reality. Because, I HIGHLY DOUBT that everypony will forgive Octavia!

Can any one of you even forgive her like Twilight did?

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Does this takes place after that?

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Maybe. But, if I was octavia I would only want forgiveness from vinyl and myself.

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She will eventually forgive herself one day. But, how can she know that Vinyl herself forgives her? When Vinyl is you know.

:'(

And I doubt that she can just ignore everypony still not liking her.

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By any chance can zecora contact the dead?

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Don't know?! Never seen her do it in the Canon Show, nor in any fan stories I have read so far in the past.

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Agreed! That probably could fix some things. But, it's no resurrection spell.

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Of course not. Usually when something is dead it’s supposed to stay dead.

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The feature film adaption of mlp from 2017

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Well Twilight is a bit of a forgiving type. Being the princess of friendship she can tell if a ponies in pain and is sorry for everything, plus she know's Octavia didn't mean what she said to Vinyl.

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True. But, I don't think that not even her can change everyponies bad opinion against Octavia for a very long time.

Octavia, I think she almost died, but luckly, Twilight had to save her.

Octavia... it's not your fault. From what I read in-between the lines and from personal experience with that sort of thing, she probably already had a lot to deal with not connected to you. You were simply the "key" if you will. If it hadn't been you it would have been somepony else. Again, don't blame yourself.

Great story! It was very sad and I felt the emotional turmoil in this one. Great job.

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