I am the guy who writes the Equestrian-Marvel Universe. If you don't know what that is, take a look at The Iron Mare. Oh, and I write other things.
After fighting against changelings, being weakened by lack of food and water, caged, killed and then brought back to life, Rainbow Dash needs some time to recover. It could take weeks or even months to recover from the physical damge. After that, what happens when she starts seeing things that aren't really there? What do these things mean?
NOTICE: Read 'Lost Family' both parts 1 and 2 first.
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It's a very interesting idea, but I think you could try to flesh it out some more. Describe the setting, the perspective, etc. Those little details can really help, just make sure you don't over describe every little thing. Just a little more description, and maybe some grammar checks could make this a pretty great story.
1382598 What do you think I'm doing in the other chapters? But thanks for the advice. And I know about spelling and grammar. It's my stupid keyboard. I need a new one.
Is this a sequel to another story? Because otherwise, RDs brother needs a better introduction. And word to the wise, Do that in the first chapter.
Other than that, this has potential. The cliche of Rainbow Dash hurting her wing is here, but you did something different with it. I'll be looking into this one.
1383107 Read my 'Lost Family' stories. They explain everything. And you might want to take a closer look at the description. Then go read the previous stories.
Okay, good. I'll give those a look see. That being taken into account, this is a great story. I can't wait to read the others.
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this is how all ponys must die
1385089 Thank you.
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Will this fic be continued, or is the nightmare one the continuation of it?
1891616 This one is incomplete at current time. I have a couple more chapters for this one. Nightmares is a different story entirely.
1892626 Thank you for the information good sir!
1892807 You are very welcome, other good sir.
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You should m8ke 'Lost Family' parts 1 and 2 into Lost Family part 1 and part 2