This story follows Spike Pendragon, a young boy from a large village, who dreams of becoming a legendary hero of Canterlot. But his dream is about to come true as he forms a dysfunctional adventuring party with a group of seven hot girls on a quest to find and defeat an evil king who plots to conquer the world with eternal darkness.
I’m sure you meant double quote marks, right?
“What’s this?” a voice spoke up.
“A ring,” Bertram said.
Other than this small mistake, great start.
Don't you mean eight heroes? Spike is included you know.
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It's also a thing in some countries to use only single quotation marks, not double. Dumb if you ask me though.
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But will he actually be useful for anything? Maybe the prophecy knows something we don't.
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Or maybe whoever wrote the prophecy could never have foretold of an eighth champion.
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It never did
I wanted to ask, is Ogres and Oubliettes similar to Dungeons and Dragons, I was just a little curious.
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Yes, yes it is