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There’s more to the magic of friendship than meets the eye!

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This story follows Spike Pendragon, a young boy from a large village, who dreams of becoming a legendary hero of Canterlot. But his dream is about to come true as he forms a dysfunctional adventuring party with a group of seven hot girls on a quest to find and defeat an evil king who plots to conquer the world with eternal darkness.

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‘What’s this?’

‘A ring.’

I’m sure you meant double quote marks, right?

“What’s this?” a voice spoke up.

“A ring,” Bertram said.

Other than this small mistake, great start.

One hundred years later, a prophecy warned of the return of Sombra. Hoping to prepare in the same fashion as they once did, the royal sisters and the pillars began working to locate and excavate the Tree of Harmony. However, another legend spoke of seven legendary champions from each of the mystical world’s regions who were chosen to form together as a new order, and help keep the world safe. Meanwhile, Princess Celestia was determined to awaken her and her sister’s power and prayed at the three springs of the goddess of the magical world, but their efforts were met with failure. Minutes after she and Luna had finished praying at the Spring of Wisdom, Sombra broke the seal that kept him dormant.

Don't you mean eight heroes? Spike is included you know.

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It's also a thing in some countries to use only single quotation marks, not double. Dumb if you ask me though.

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But will he actually be useful for anything? Maybe the prophecy knows something we don't.

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Or maybe whoever wrote the prophecy could never have foretold of an eighth champion.

I wanted to ask, is Ogres and Oubliettes similar to Dungeons and Dragons, I was just a little curious.

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