Just at a night of Twilight's rare non-working days, the Celesti-O's vanished from Ponyville. At first, a screaming dragon seems to be everything that is caused by this problem. But as her friend Pinkie Pie calls on the unicorn for help to get the most-loved cereals of Equestria back, things begin to turn out to be much more complicated then Twilight had first thought.
Warning: Some romance between the Cakes is going on in the bonus-chapter, but there is no need to read it since it's not part of the storyline itself.
Proofreading done by Eagle Heart. Yay!
Chapters (4)
Damn, this chapter would be so bucking amazing if not for the long wall of texts I keep seeing, and love the way how you put Laurn in this story, as a goddess
Hmmmm...be sure to seprate your paragraphs, remember...five lines to a paragraph....I'll be awaiting more and I seen some spelling and grammer errors that need to be changed, just a heads up...will be reading more. On to the next one!
Forgot to say, it's Sorrow, if only for a small amount of time, it's still her!
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Wait a minute... you commented here. I swear, this fiction is cursed with a cloak-spell or something.
What do you mean when saying "it's Sorrow"? Yeah, I'm asking a bit late ... sorry.
I guess I'll have to search for spelling and grammar errors on my own now. Damn it, but improvement never stops. Not even 17 weeks and two thumbs-up later.
A few errors here and there but nothing major, rather enjoyable, I like it bro
And Sorrow (Element of Despair, dark half of Pinkie Pie and second in command of the Elements of Disharmony)
You got a few grammar errors in the story. Otherwise its pretty ok...
6534865 And here I am, three years later. Proofreader and everything. Weird, isn't it?