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Flutterflyer


We Always Be Wondercolts Forever. (Big Fluttershy, Rainbow, Sunset and Luna fan).

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As Octavia performs for her princess, she finds herself thinking of her muse once more.

While listening to her favorite performer, Celestia finds herself lost in thought about its beautiful composer.

(Or, in which two ponies who have never met, think on what they mean for each other).

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I love the almost Buddhist esque detachment that Celestia requires to keep herself in check, realising that one step merely leads her on the path to full Daybreaker.

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Glad you enjoyed that! It's a character angle that came to me while writing that I also just adore.

So that was really packed with feelings! I never did well in literature, but I am certain that this is some good writing here. We need more folks to explore the wonders of cool concepts like what you had in mind, and keep up the good work!
Also……
Not to sound like a nerd, but……

Besides, would Octavtia really think that highly of her? She doubted she hated her, but a fondness towards their ruler was quite different to the romantic interest Celestia had for her. But still, the tingle of longing in her heart remained, bringing forth a final sigh as a familiar statement ran through her mind once more.

You misspelled "Octavia" in there.

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Thanks so much! I’m so happy you liked my concepts!

Dang it, lol. My editor is kicking himself and I am too. Could have been worse.

Beautifully done.

My honest opinion to this is that there should be a sequel where these two meet up or at least that Luna let's Celestia know exactly how Octavia sees her after observing one of the dreams the celloist has

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