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Lil Penpusher


Put the words in the bag and nopony gets hurt

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River Swirl is many things. A born riverlander, a capable and accomplished student at Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns, a teacher, and finally, the Chancellor of the River Republic.

Or, she was, at least.

Life always puts hurdles in your way to overcome, and yet, when River Swirl is voted out of office, a dream comes crashing down for her. A project she had dreamed of for so long flushed down the drain along with her career.

But she knows there has to be more to herself. More than a politician, no matter her good intentions. She always wanted to bring her ponies forward, to a brighter future. Perhaps now she can go back and look at the past, and find out just where she went wrong. A past that was as troubled as it was great.

And perhaps even the most vague of bonds of years gone by can yet grow into something far greater.


River Swirl and the locations described in this story belong to the Equestria at War alternate universe. Knowing it is not required for this oneshot, but this is where you should go if you're wondering about location names and such.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Another great story, from the great author.

Maybe you could write more about the River Ponies etc? It looks like it fits for you

REEEEEEEEEEEE WHERE IS SECONDOOO REEEEEEEE /s

Wholesome River Swirl is wholesome. This was just a bundle of sugar that you'd expext Pinkie Pie to consume on a daily basis. *pat*

Unless outright love was involved, most simply weren't ready ready to go that extra mile or two and waste time on a relationship

I think the first one is meant to be "really," yes?

or at least she didn't consider himself as such.

River is most adorable stallion.


Anyway, nice little read, River needs more love for she's too adorable.

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Much obliged for the pair of pointers. Glad you enjoyed the little read! :twilightsmile:

Daww. This chapter is so cute! :rainbowkiss:

I really liked that you gave a better back story, as well as a personality, to a character that, even though she is one the "main" leaders of one of the big nations of EaW, doesn't have the biggest story on the mod, while her personality & what she done before becoming leader of the River Republic, isn't really being talked about.

Funnily enough, I would like either a sequel of this, or something along the line of "The Prodigy Emperor" style or something. :pinkiehappy:

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