After a chance encounter on a train to Trottingham, a vacationing Fluttershy finds herself mistaken for the mysterious La Mariposa, a notorious mercenary master-of-disguise. As a result, Fluttershy is drawn into a world of secret agents, murderous henchponies, and monologuing villains.
Fluttershy, however, has absolutely no idea what's going on.
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Names 00-Shy, Fluttershy here to get scared of crime and save the world 🌎
Spoiler alert: It's a problem.
Oh sweet new chapter! Can’t wait for more!
Can’t wait to see everypony go crazy thinking Fluttershy is some short of super ultra spy and she just lives her day normally
Hey, your name is literally Hired Muscle--you're supposed to be the one here with Da Muscles, not be the one with Da Brains.
Yes, but clearly NOT a long history of intelligence.
This story is pretty good so far. The premise isn't that original, but it's still funny to watch play out. My biggest complaint would be that there isn't that much of Fluttershy's perspective so far. I get that, in a story like this, you have to show a lot of the other characters' POVs, but I still feel it could have benefited from more Fluttershy too. Beyond that, you had a few spelling errors every once in a while, but nothing too distracting.
Rip Heavy… I would think they would get a unicorn to spell check his statue just in case or at least the animals tell Fluttershy. I guess no pony will be able to catch Fluttershy
Well, no, not exactly, considering doctors generally order things that'll perserve the patient's life, not jeopardize it greatly. At this rate, Fluttershy will have all of these bad guys beat simply by obliviously luring them into situations where they get themselves bumped off.
You don't say.
Well, you know, one's dead...the other might as well be dead...
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What literature/movies are similar?
I am aware of "The Man Who Knew Too Little"/"Watch That Man", "Murder Mystery" (Possibly adjacent), and "Date Night". Are there more in this genre that I am missing? If so, please share!
To the author:
Best wishes with this amusing spoof!
Oh man, those two guys are super lucky. Can’t wait to see what Park they’ll go to!
You got this Fluttershy!
Or at least engage a sort of "parental control" mode on that section of her brain.
And she did it by doing absolutely nothing at all!
His grandfather must've been a very interesting stallion then.
Man, these supervillains really need to work on their names--I mean, could you be any more obvious about your nefarious intent?
Flutters is going to have quite a kill count and not even realize it before this is all over. Part of me actually somewhat hopes she never does, since I'm sure she'd probably not take that well, but still...it says something about all of these baddies that they're all getting taken out by a mare that doesn't even know what the heck's going on, let alone that it's all because of her.
Will there be a bill Murray look-alike in the story eventually?
“Well, no, not exactly, considering doctors generallyorder things that'll perserve the patient's life, not jeopardize it greatly. At this rate, Fluttershy will have all of these bad guys beat simply by obliviously luring them into situations where they get themselves bumped off.
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Perhaps the doctor in question was more of a Doctor Frankenfurter type doctor
Awesome chapter! I wonder if she was always been that mysterious mare but never realized it
Rip villain
And to be honest, you're probably better off without the ones that had previously been filling them, considering they all mostly offed themselves in the end.
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...did this guy's parents just WANT him dead or something when they named him that?
More importantly though...is Red Shirt indeed wearing an actual, honest-to-gosh...red shirt?
Conveniently also all wearing red shirts themselves.
Yeah, I suspect Charon's sorting that part out now as we speak. Convoluted Plan isn't going to have very many lackeys left by the time this is all over...not that I expect him to even still be in a position to be carrying out any evil plans by then, but beside the point.
Goodness, Charon, you still haven't gotten filled up on baddies yet? Well, all right, suit yourself, but if you get a stomach ache from all this, don't go crying about it later.
WHAT IF MY LITTLE PONY HAD THEY FOUND OUT?
This definitely is one of the best Fluttershy stories that even Fluttershy isn’t aware about the whole plot at all. I don’t think I’ve seen much stories like that since this story feels like it was inspired by Mr. Bean or other films with the same premise.
Nice to see that La Mariposa came to the scene and seeing what happened when likely she might not had been able to do the things that Fluttershy did makes sense. I wonder if they’ll meet? Btw does Fluttershy know about ponies mistakenly think she was a different pony or she didn’t fully understood what Discord just say?
If this story gets a sequel it would be really cool. Another adventure with Fluttershy not knowing what’s going on
I think you meant “mare” unless the pony has an accent?
Heh, I'm pretty sure that, in the end, not even La Mariposa will want to mess with "La Mariposa"...not that Fluttershy would ever be aware of it, of course.
And alls well that ends well...for those who matter, at least.
this story had me laughing my arse off, all the chain reaction events happening, ponies believeing fluttershy is the most ruthless coldblooded pony in equestria
Got damb, another absolute comedy banger of a chapter!!
Excellent ending!
This story could benefit from a proofreader or editor to help fix all the typos. They're minor, but one doesn't want them breaking a reader's immersion in the story.