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This story is a sequel to The Farmer and The Fae


Sentinel is dead and life has returned to normal at Sweet Apple Acres for Applejack and Fluttershy, but things aren't well with the world. Dark forces are stirring behind the scenes, and a lost courier forces the pair of them to make a journey up to Canterlot, where the headquarters of the Order of Celestia, the Paladins that struck hope into the hearts of all and fear into those that crept in shadow. When they arrive, though, the order is having their own troubles, and the dynamic duo may be only just in time to save Equestria.

Sequel to The Farmer and the Fae, which is itself a spinoff of The Necromantic Adventures of Lyra Heartstrings.

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it's nice to see them as good folks, and rare that folks play or show them that way, over the zealous particulars that so many get to see.

When you think about it, Flim and Flam are a... special kind of assassin. Sure, some assassins have a black and twisted sense of honor that demands that they try and only kill their target; Murdering innocent bystanders is greatly frowned upon. Some care less about only taking out the target and they are willing to spill innocent blood as long as the target dies... but to sic an army of demonic creatures on a whole city in an attempt to kill one person is a special kind of crazy that few people can really prepare for.

I can't help but feel that the Flim Flam brothers are not going to be paid because they didn't fulfill their contract and kill the target... But if the plan was to simply remove the old head of the order from a position of power so that there was a young, inexperienced leader at the helm when the serious power plays were going to be made then their employers win regardless.

Okay, this was actually a very fun story, I'm glad to have finally got to it. The ongoing adventures of this duo is nice and I agree it's good to see the paladins doing their job. Film and Flam were a good foil to AJ.. Overall I liked and hope we get a few more of these.

One note formatting wise; about half way you're missing a bunch of line breaks and have a couple paragraphs running together. It's a simple cleanup job.

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